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Susan Michie-Bent

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The characters were interesting. But the descriptions and language use was strange.

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-10-25

The reading was poorly done and there was too much of the author’s political opinion within the stories.

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Could have been better

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-11-21

The dialogue doesn’t flow and is choppy. There seems to be a lot of prejudice against a variety of ethnic groups. There is too much talk about the guns and firepower. I got it right away. They are heavily armed and must be for protection. There is also a lot of repetition. Saying the same thing too many times. Could be tightened up with good editing. The story itself has potential but sort of gets lost in poor structure.

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