LoupGarou

Storytelling

Revisado: 06-05-24

Great flow, Characters, plots, ambiance, and focus. Love the way the story is moving along. Contrary to others, this author's story feels real and relatable. No over powdered/clever characters or MC who is blessed with everything and yet predictably and spectacularly fails just to be be saved by some Deus ex Maxina. Please keep on writing these wonderful stories.

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Storytelling

Revisado: 02-22-24

Character development, pace, grounded, down to earth, relatable, enjoyable. the story was believable without obvious Deus Ex Maxina. The emphasis was on a believable story with a judicious touch of harem development. well done.

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Confused

Revisado: 11-18-22

Not sure what this was. wasn't sure where the story was going. a lot of unresolved issues and unanswered questions.

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Firefly fans, this for you!

Revisado: 10-29-22

Great story, great characters. Firefly revival. well done. character development was great, the progression was natural and organic. nothing was forced or fabricated. please keep them coming

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Fresh story. highly recommend

Revisado: 10-26-22

Author stayed on target and kept the story on topic. it's refreshing to see that a MC acting like a sensible adult for a change. MC was surrounded by beautiful willing female characters and did not act like an horny teenager. He with the situation realistically and wasn't complaining about it or how he can't believe things are happening every 5 minutes.

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Getting better all the time

Revisado: 10-22-22

The story is getting bigger with more challenges for our MC. Bigger and better opponents and opportunities for personal growth. however, MC is still stuck being oblivious and sometimes incredibly selfish with no regards for his companions feelings and safety with it comes to basic things like eating food. I would like to see him stop making the same mistake/decisions and somehow expecting different results. not realizing that he got himself there. sex scenes are decent if not repetitive and lacking imagination.

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Good story, good narration

Revisado: 10-20-22

Overall really good story. MC was really thick at times ( ridiculously so) . it's a character flaw that resulted in some questionable decision making that almost lead to disaster in the beginning and cost him in the end. However the flaw did lined up with the world he lives in and the nature of what he does. it was a perfect opportunity to explore some character development and allow him to grow. hope book 2 addresses that.

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Good story. Needs work

Revisado: 10-13-22

Narration was on point for the material. My only issue is with the MC. Dude has a lot going for him. he's a Guard's Capt. with combat, strategy, and court etiquette experience. He has powers and beautiful and willing women by his side but somehow manage to be confused, lost, doubtful, and make plain dumb decisions. His thoughts process is all over the place. He start a thought, then gets easily distracted by one thing or another and misses on key clues or opportunities. We're two books in and literally lots of bodies behind us. it's about time for him to grow up and be more consistent.

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Predator at it's best.

Revisado: 10-08-22

The story fills you with awe, wonderful, fear, and courage at the same time. well done.

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A Must Read!

Revisado: 09-22-22

Excellent writing and Narration. Good story and plot. MC has a harem but seems to be modest with his relationships. Story is not focused around sexual prowess but in solving the mystery of of forgotten past. Well done.

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