OYENTE

Rob

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In need of a serious rewrite and a voice actor

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Revisado: 03-21-25

I have 2.5 hrs left and I'm not sure if I can even finish the author needs to just go over the whole series and rewrite it. Good idea love the whole didnt have to die to get iseki, but needs to reconsider the premise of the story and reconstruct the conversations between multiple characters, gives me a head ache trying to figure out who said what and the ai narration doesn't help. It could be a good series just seems that some of the important turning points of each book was rushed and the characters need to be more fleshed out. A prolog in the first book to give more background would have helped as well. Won't consider even reading the books till gets reworked.

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