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a note to the author.

Revisado: 03-17-25

I'm going to be honest or at least as honest as I think I'm capable of being. I haven't finished reading the book in fact I've only gotten to chapter 6 and I just want to know from the author, who hurt you? and why do you feel the necessity to take it out on your narrator? you poor poor individual. I say individual because after chapter 6 I'm not entirely sure that you even know what you are, but I digress seek therapy. for the Love of All that is good and holy please seek therapy.

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if you don't I'm going to be very upset and disappointed.

Revisado: 02-27-25

first of all let me go ahead and get this out of the way. hooray for butt stuff!! second to the narrator how does someone sound so nasally and yet so sexy and the exact same time? it's like Harley Quinn had a head cold while having sex. story had a good pace and was very crawling however I do wish there were more actual sex scenes instead of faint black comments. I don't know if it's Miss Hawthorne or Mr Knightley but finally someone's not afraid to stick it in the rear the descriptive about it. and I love me some good titty sucking!

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this story has no meaningless sex. despite the fact that it continues to have sex that has no meaning.

Revisado: 02-08-25

first of all let me start off by saying for a smut book the political intrigue in this can get pretty impressive. the story is not terrible however the lack of any butt stuff really sucks at the book as a whole suffers from it considering what it is.

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cliffhanger much?!

Revisado: 12-23-24

I absolutely love the way this book progressed with so many character developments and relationship evolutions. The light-heartedness slice of Life day to day antics that are heroes get into put me in such a great mood. but then that ending!! I just can't even.

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needs more comedy.

Revisado: 11-11-24

with as many strong-willed individuals as there are in the party I feel like the opportunity for smart ass comments good one-liners picking on each other and just joking around is lacking. too much seriousness especially given who Jake really is.

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finally

Revisado: 08-18-24

the number of spicy scenes seem to be dwindling. and this book seems to be more slice of Life or day-to-day with the children. that being said the quality has definitely gone up in what scenes there are so I will leave with this, yay for butt stuff!

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a smut book with an invisible protagonist sounds really interesting.

Revisado: 05-30-24

this is the most frustrating book I have ever TRIED to listen to. 80% of the book is talking about how the main character is walking around completely naked where anybody can look at her but not see her, 10% is trying to make up a b*******he Sakai story with Japanese sounding names with made up feudal cast positions in a world that does not exist and we have nothing to base half of the positions other than brother and father on. 5% of that is character building using isekai rules. and the last 5% consists of really poorly thought out sex scenes that are limited only to lesbian relationships while talking about how she just doesn't like men in the middle of it. I got halfway through this and got so irritated with the book I called audible and demanded a refund.

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umm..

Revisado: 01-14-24

my ONLY problem with this story is that they got a woman with the SEXIEST voice I have EVER heard to narrate a male MC. I could get off listening to this girl read the Bible.

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I mean, what the heck!?

Revisado: 11-29-23

this book seems to be just fluff. no plot progression. no character development, no plot twist (ending on a cliffhanger doesn't count.) and I think I'm starting to be able to predict what is about to happen in the book well before it's relavence with a good bit of accuracy.

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FINALLY

Revisado: 11-08-23

A halfway decent story that has good butt stuff scenes. the elves are a like lost ducks that see their man can't do no wrong in their eyes. and the guy just sees someone he wants to kill and they die without too much difficulty.

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