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very good

Revisado: 03-23-25

it has a very good story for an erotic story. I'm going to say that the story was better than her usual work.

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is that it

Revisado: 03-06-25

I feel that the story spent more time telling you that they are futanari than anything else. the story only has one sex since.

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so a system outbreak

Revisado: 09-16-24

this book is the star of a system series. The US has found out how to make worm hole but they don't completely understand them. the first time one of this Worm hole is made it destroyed part of a big city. this story takes place in rural Colorado where a small facility is working on making a smaller worm hole. this facility is using an AI name Promitius to with the primary gold of making the energy product by the worm hole usable by all of humanity. exposure to this energy makes the Promitius AI go sapien so he comes to the conclusion that the best way to make this energy usable by every one is by making a system and adapting people to the energy. However he disad that the best way to implement the system is by copying MMO RPG as inspiration.

TLDR an AI used Energy from a magic portal to make System and give everyone classes.

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the tournament Arc

Revisado: 11-23-23

the story has a good pass all the way to the end. it's a good mix between action and slide of life. this book is has some of the best action of the series and some of most interesting interactions between Jin and other characters.

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this is the best of out all the books so far

Revisado: 05-23-22

this is not the best book to start on however it's the best one by far. The story in book 13 is one of the best cultivating stories in the I have seen so far. it's well divided in too two stories one of cultivating and one more like d&d

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It's very mmma

Revisado: 05-28-21

It's not particularly better than the audio book. Some of the actors missed the mark in casting and in tone. A lot of the action is not as sharp if you don't know what it's happening already. The last thing is that the book of super powers year 1 is one credit and this is 3 credit and there cuting some of the story not a lot but some. If you want to get your moneys worth get the book not this shit.

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Not a bad start for a hero

Revisado: 06-07-20

There is alot more time when I feel that I'm ahead of Jonathan in the story like when he asks about where the portal is going to open

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Have the book doesn't matter at all.

Revisado: 06-12-19

This book does not contain anything that move the story forward. Half the book doesn't have any thing to do with the overall story or the crew of the flying Dutchman. If you are going to skip any book this is the on I think you should skip.

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This is better than the last one

Revisado: 09-08-18

This book is better is at story telling and has more identifiable characters over all. The story is a lot easier to follow this is a very big contrast to the second half of the last book. This say I feel that the story does not give you any closures for any character from X. to the catman. All this say I think that if you star in the first book and them skip the second you can jump in to this one no problem and get more bag for your buck.

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Holli shit it's good

Revisado: 02-19-18

this book is good because of it's usage of because and there for. Every decision that Barny make on this book has a direct impact on the story from the first one to the last one. The character on Barny and Skipy are the best part of the book.

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