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Author need to figure out what sort of story to tell

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-25-24

The narration is so bad I could only last for 2 hours. Could be an interesting story (war weary mage trying to go for a new career) if the author kept to the story rather than the desire of the hero. I was looking forward to hearing how he would get the willow tree back to its proper place but no, it’s just “we may have to do something risky”, the girl kisses him and poof end of scene. The author needs to seriously figure out what sort of story he’s trying to tell. From the 1/3 of the book I heard, this is one of those sex escapades disguised as LitRPG/ fantasy.

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Love DB King

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-21-22

Great story with an excellent narrator! Would highly recommend story, narrator and author for anyone who likes adventure!

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Audible please fix!

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-10-18

The story and narration are great! However, someone bungled up the recording. The Second half of the book is first and the first half is second. Audible please fix this!

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esto le resultó útil a 4 personas

Well done!

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-25-18

I truly enjoyed this book! The ALFA books are different from her PDA books in that there is more story and substance and less angst (thank goodness). I really liked how in these books the heroines are intelligent, strong and quite capable.

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esto le resultó útil a 2 personas

Great story!

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-21-17

I really liked that this story was well developed without having too much angst/insecurity on the heroine’s part as well as not getting too raunchy. There are plenty of stories out there that are just sex oriented.
I look forward to seeing what is next from this author.

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esto le resultó útil a 19 personas

B story and B- narration

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-09-16

The story was choppy and ill-timed. Could've been a smoother transition. Many holes in the story. The narration was good and that her presentation and enunciation is well done, But all of the female voices are in high-pitched little school girl voices which grates on the nerves after a while. I think the narrator could've done better with her character study.

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