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Home Invasion
- The Survivalist Series, Book 8
- De: A. American
- Narrado por: Duke Fontaine
- Duración: 9 h y 42 m
- Versión completa
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General5 out of 5 stars 5,098
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Narración:5 out of 5 stars 4,715
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Historia4.5 out of 5 stars 4,690
Morgan and his extended family could see the light at the end of the tunnel, dim though it may be. There was the promise of power once again. The plant was being repaired, and it looked as though it may actually run. While it meant lots of hard, sweaty work, the reward was worth the investment. The farm was growing strong, and community involvement was good. People were finally coming to terms with the fact that they needed to work together. So far Mother Nature had been on their side. But that, too, was about to change.
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2 out of 5 stars
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A lot of filler and not a lot of substance.
- De Amazon Customer en 07-22-17
- Home Invasion
- The Survivalist Series, Book 8
- De: A. American
- Narrado por: Duke Fontaine
Was A. American writing this one drunk?
Revisado: 09-20-23
I'd like to start off by saying I think this is a good story and there are a lot of realistic aspects to the story. I just feel like it's not very well written. The first few books were decent and didn't have too many errors. There was some superfluous banter and childish horse play but it wasn't too terribly outlandish. However, as the books have went on the childish humor and banter and for lack of a better term, Three stooges, routine has gotten worse and worse. It does nothing to make the story better and is just fluff and filler. It gets annoying. This book was absolutely the worst so far though when it comes to this aspect. I don't know what kind of friends the author has but no matter how much crap my friends and I are trying to give each other we never physically assault each other or point loaded weapons at each other. I highly doubt military men and supposed to tier three and tier 2 operators would engage in that type of garbage. My other really big issue with this book is the amount of mistakes. It really seemed as though the author spent most of his writing time intoxicated or something that would have affected his memory. He can't seem to keep his own story straight. He suggests ideas and then a few pages later suggest the same ideas again. He gets names wrong and his time line seems to be confused. There were conversations that seem to happen over and over again. Then there were things written about in the book that we're supposed to have happened that didn't. Seems like very amateurish work. Again, good story, just very sloppy writing. Also, please for the love of God, find some new cliches and stop using the same ones over and over again.
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The Day the End Began
- Days of the Apocalypse, Book 1
- De: Mark E. Fisher
- Narrado por: Kaeomakana Tiwanak
- Duración: 11 h y 2 m
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General4 out of 5 stars 41
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Narración:3 out of 5 stars 39
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Historia4 out of 5 stars 39
The end times predicted in the book of Revelation are about to crash down upon the world. The forces of evil are marshaling under the guise of a man of peace. One woman, gifted with divine prophecy, foretells a time of terrible trial and divine judgment. Are her visions a gift from God, warning that the coming Tribulation can be avoided? Or are they a trick from the Great Deceiver? When Dylan discovers her prophecies, his life changes forever, and he joins her.
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4 out of 5 stars
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Good story, needs a new narrator
- De carmela en 11-20-22
- The Day the End Began
- Days of the Apocalypse, Book 1
- De: Mark E. Fisher
- Narrado por: Kaeomakana Tiwanak
please use a new narrator next time
Revisado: 07-02-23
I liked the story and thought it was fairly well written. There were some things when it comes to operational security that I thought were lacking such as security with the phones and how sloppy they were in that regard. Also if Sergey was such a spy master, he did some very sloppy things like showing up at the apartment that he knows is being watched. In the future when you are talking about reloading a gun that uses magazines please don't call them clips. They are magazines. My big gripe though was the narrator. I couldn't get over the fact that he sounded like a child and didn't really give much vocal personality to any of the characters.
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