OYENTE

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good story

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-12-24

I liked the story, the only thing that lessened the story was the narrators, the male sounded like he was CHEWING gum the whole time.

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the writter may have onset dementia

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-06-24

the story skips info and repeats the same scenes in same chapters, it's like the writter either has some serious memory issues or some sort of A.D.D., you'd think the proof reader would of pointed out the OBVIOUS red flags of the story its like 3 separate storyline within 1 micro novel....the base of the story has potential, it's the delivery of that story that was terrible, so confusingat 1 point i had to start it over thinking I missed something, it wasn't me that's for sure.

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