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Interesting definitely kind of fun

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-28-25

Definitely better than average, but I wouldn’t classify it as great. though I suppose it has the potential to become great. I’m undecided as to whether or not I will ever get book two, but maybe.

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Main characters personality doesn’t make sense

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-28-25

I won’t spend too much time on this. Human female dies on earth is born in a new body on a new planet . Spent eight years in the new body is now eight years old. The author :claims: the main character has all of her memories from her previous life. So why is the eight-year-old acting like an eight-year-old when she’s not actually eight years old. it’s extremely offputting. It doesn’t make any sense. I forced my way five hours in. There’s a whole lot of other really dumb things that happened that I’m not mentioning . if you’re OK with a book that’s has a grown adult making eight -year-old bad decisions go for it. Otherwise skip this book.

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Constructive criticism

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-01-25

First : take it easy with the comedy. Taking a bad joke and repeating it over and over again only annoys the reader, even taking a good joke and then repeating it over and over again will only annoyed the audience.

Example : Eyeball salad. Not funny. But then eyeball salad continues to be mentioned four or five more times. WHY? Mispronouncing Dallas over and over again, not funny just kind of pointless and silly and takes away from the story.

Second : Main character takes way way way too long to figure out he’s not dreaming. Main character is repeatedly referred to as a gamer, and yet throughout the book is constantly having to have every single little thing explained to him. Status, inventory map, etc..

Third : LOOT : main character fights, his way through a dungeon, kills all the monsters in the dungeon even some monsters that weren’t supposed to be in the dungeon, hard fought almost die, and then he leaves the loot behind. He just leaves the dungeon he doesn’t even bother to stop to regain his resources, manner and health. There’s possibly a lot of loot left behind in a monster‘s nest the monster he’s already killed, but he doesn’t go back for it. He just leaves.

The first two points I can just chalk up to maybe the book was written for 10-year-olds but the last part … leaving behind loot … that’s kind of unforgivable.

Summary: Main character cannot be stupid. Main character cannot be a coward. Main character cannot be the least interesting character in the book. I fill these are issues that can be fixed pretty easily in a rewrite, but I also assume that since this is way past book one there will be no rewrite. I’m scared to waste time listening to book too knowing there’s a great possibility that the character continues to not know anything and need everything explained to him that he’s going to continue to find reasons to leave behind loot and the bad bad comedy that I feel the writers are trying to force on the reader, not realizing that they’re not Funny.

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In a nutshell shell

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-23-24

Start of book:
Male Main character is right all females are wrong.
Middle of book:
Main Bad guy is obvious, but we still have to wait till the end of the book before the main character figures it out.
End of book: female he abandoned shows up to save his life. Just in time for the main character to save the day.

Overall story has potential, but having said that I have no intention of ever getting book two.

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Bad after taste

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-20-24

Having a young man, character is always a problem unless you’re a 12-year-old reader. But the story was fine. I enjoyed the world building and the leveling process, but something really stupid happens at the end of the book that just I just can’t get past

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I think I liked it?

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-20-24

It had a great deal of potential. It just didn’t quite reach that potential. The battle sequences were a little long. If the main character is a bad ass, let him be a bad ass. The main character doesn’t always have to have a long drawn out fight before he finally defeats his opponent

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So many Questions

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-20-24

Why do only a handful of people get inducted to start. It’s nonsensical.

Why are they not allowed to tell anybody?

Why does the main character have to have a love interest? It adds absolutely nothing to the story.

Why are multiple systems fighting over the same area? It’s a Multiverse. There’s an infinite amount of space. Planets territory. Why fight over a rock when there’s an infinite amount of the exact same rocks?

Billions of people on the Earth only five get chosen , one of the five is a part of a religious terrorist group.. really?

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Where is the rest of the book

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-20-24

I really like the story. Not sure how the leveling system works. But the main thing is … why was the book so short … where is the rest of it?

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Author and narrator, please stop

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-20-24

Constructive criticism.
Author, I feel like you’re forcing humor into the story and it’s taking away from the story.
Narrator, the voices you’re using for the mimic are really, really distracting from the story.

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High potential

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-20-24

Something I liked was that there is no love interest. So annoying when the main character falls in love with the first female he meets.
Something I disliked. Elf queen wants to take over and rule the other races. All of the other races are too busy fighting amongst themselves to rise up and put a stop to the evil elf queen. Kind of cliché.

The story has a great enough potential that I will be interested in book 2 but if in book 2, there’s more of the same …. As in “the main character has to talk since into the supposedly more intelligent rulers in order to get them to realize there’s a danger that they need to unite against “that can get boring really fast.

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