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20 chapters in ... 8 fights/conflicts

Revisado: 03-31-25

sloooowwww development. Main character spend hours of book discussing stats... boring. I can't recommend it nor stand waiting for story to move forward

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Too many states reads that take 3 min to listen through

Revisado: 10-21-24

I love lit rpg's but the author put in way to many llloonngg reqd through of player stats and "goblin hits for 45 blunt damage". stats over story wore me down. also there is limited sub story beyond big goal defined for the book.

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Others, great,, this was worst so far

Revisado: 06-09-24

ultimately feels like a filler book. i loved all the others ), 1-13. There was one main event early and rest was just travel and then a huge plot twist at the end. I swear, they did me a favor. I didnt like how he failed to develop the Azria character. I didnt like the boring story buildup to a weird plot twist... I don't need to pay for the rest of the series... I'm done with this one.

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It was boring ...

Revisado: 04-09-24

day in the life long book just telling story of time passing. no buildup, no storyline, men, wouldn't recommend

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50% sex or foreplay, 30% inner thoughts about sex,, 20% avg story

Revisado: 02-21-24

Most of the books were rinse and repeat of same story. Human meets strong alien male, resists but gives in and fall madly into amazing sex repeat 3x ... done

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weak plot.

Revisado: 02-10-24

I wish the author had invested time in a plot deeper than a runaround teacher and student. Also the Hunter character is emotionally/mentally same problems as Malcom in last book. Pretty basic.

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Virtual Voice is hard to listen to

Revisado: 02-03-24

I liked the characters and their dynamics and the story was unique. There were some holes to fill but the hardest part was not realizing that it was virtual voice. the narrator was so off key delivering the lines 'robotically'. Emotion sound didn't match the words. Right at end narrated by virtual voice... sigh. hard listen 🎶

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Had potential butt

Revisado: 01-07-24

The author just randomly introduces plot and characters without any back story and you're just left to assume or know some type of history that hasn't been previously presented

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great concept lost in simplistic plot

Revisado: 01-04-24

the main character was interesting but the middle to end of the book the family made gross assumptions to create family challenges that weren't believable. Then the silly typical plot twist at the end was so 70s TV. Ruined what started as great science fiction concept.

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throw away book...

Revisado: 12-01-23

The author took the time to basically throw together content just to sell a book. The storyline was very uncharacteristically bad for this author. Overall a poorly written book that you shouldn't waste your time on. Honestly it was it's really disappointing for an author to take this route considering the awesome titles and work that he's put before it.It's almost as if he's run out of content

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