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Kelly Green

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Sexist and cliche

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-16-25

Gross plot about a bet to sleep with a woman by Christmas. Doesn’t show the female characters as full characters only plot tools for the man’s story.

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Get past the word zombie, it’s worth it.

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-12-25

I skipped over this book several times before I gave it a try. It was pretty great. Once you let go of the word zombie, it’s just a shifter romance with a little resurrection thrown in.

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Rough draft

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-01-25

I couldnt get more than 2 hours in. The concept of brothers separated finding each other again is appealing, but the story feels unfinished, like a rough draft that was never flushed out or checked for inaccuracies.

Pros change from first person to third and back.

No world or character building. Shallow uninvested plot that both moves to fast and doesn’t move at all.
My synopsis in 2 hours of listening:

Guy turns into a bear and the girl just shrugs and says ok. No questions, or freak out.

Instant relationship with no conversation or explanation.

As soon as the MCs are introduced to each other, a parent dies without ever building any character so that you don’t really care that her mom died. Same day they arrive at her house the visitation is the next day, and the funeral the day after, but the car accident is still being investigated. Unrealistic time frame.

He’s an orphan but handled himself well around her family, but her whole family is portrayed as 1 flat character with only 1 personality trait. And main character is the only one that’s different and obviously left out, but no backstory.

Introvert girl brings rock star to mom’s funeral, then the family is framed as bad by asking questions about the relationship.

Cliche Rich rock star keeps saving the simple, plain, introverted girl.

Second day they’ve known each other and girl walks around in a towel in a hotel room and there’s no awkwardness, or extreme attraction. “I’ve been waiting to have sex with you my whole life”. Magic instant orgasm.
I’m already in love with you and I’m totally accepting of it. No real feelings expressed about the relationship.

I’m dying for this story after 2 more drafts.

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A full fiction world

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-18-24

Story was original with knods to classic fiction, compelling characters, a world with history and culture and a happy ending.

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