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Great story, great originality, awful mc personality

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-28-25

This mc is a moron. Everyone he meets notices and informs him of this too so it was the authors intent to make him so. He is not stupid just WILLFULLY ignorant, arrogant with no reason to be, and shallow. He reminds me of most stories spoiled princelings. Issue is he is main character and while his stupidity teaches us much about the world its hard to bare at times. Also the shallowness towards female characters is also hard to put up with to the point you want to put the book down. I don't know if ill pick up the book or not the world is so creative id like but if the mc doest start developing a brain soon i think ill put series as a no go

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No depth

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-27-25

We go the whole story learning only that our mc is a barbarian type character that likes to talk to horse. We learn nothing else about him not his past, or possible future. This leaves you with no attachment to said character. He is neither likable or unlikable and same with overall story. Character has one quest after another so its not like he is standing still but here are the quest, tax collector were he goes to random to beat up residence snd collect gold 30 pieces. Second quest discourage a forceful suiter, were he goes and beats up suiters guards then takes one gold and a lay instead of his 350 gold. Third quest escort caravan that is supposed to be guarding him and whom he pays gold to to guard him, he beats up random brigands get pretty much rewards. Caravan drops him-off he travels to were starting quest is solos the dungeon as he spent a whole day looking for party members before deciding its taking to long. He continues to try and talk to absent horse the whole time he is dungeon he defeats end litch rather easily end of story.......very boring and you just got the whole story in a few paragraphs instead of a whole book. I promise the book is actually less interesting then my review

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Fallout

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-25-25

This story is pretty much fall out as a story. The story isnt about the original fall out character and it's not supposed to be same world but if you played fallout there is no way you wont see the copy. Nothing really wrong with that but in the world of fallout their are not alot of options. You scrap build weapons and fight mostly the same mobs and same type of bandits over and over again. Its not a bad story its just not very original

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Another dungeon book with fairy disease

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-22-25

We start out with a creative smart and likable protagonist. In enters a very childlike, low intelligence, and excitable fairy. Result as with every other book I've read with dungeon fairy's is fairy disease. Fairy disease: where every other character in book suddenly suffers from stupidity in order to make the fairy look useful to the story, this results in the protagonist becoming as stupid as the fairy and constantly depending on the fairy to either support their ideas, justify their actions, or save the day with what should be obvious ideas. Remember author starts out with intelligent/ confident protagonist. By mid way through he is a mess with repeating inner dialogue every chapter before he remembers he is " not alone" and finally moves forward for a few pages (usually after fairy gushes over him".

Second thing is the reader. He makes the fairy sound like a mix between an excited chuwawa and Shaggy from scooby doo. Its almost unbearable with voice change mid word.

End review story is not bad but suffers from to much inner dialogue, annoying fairy, and really bad pacing.

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Broken english

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1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-29-25

If you want a story were the characters all use broken english and bad grammar this is the book for the you. As for me ill pass so i dont have to cringe every other sentence. Gangster speech is not for me

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Way to much small talk

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-27-25

Good premise but not enough action and a lot of useless info/small talk. When mc is not talking to his girlfriend friend he is talking to himself. He constantly goes over details in his head only to say it doesn’t matter and is he right it is some random thing he is contemplating that has no purpose to story progression.
Him and his girlfriend are constantly saying they are not ready to move to next step only in next sentence to try to throw themselves at each other only to stop again. Same with the girls mood she is happy one second and then upset and then happy. They have shower and or bath 4 times in like 14 hours with more small talk sooooooo dragged out.
Lastly the mc finally decides to go hunting kills min monsters and then 50 pages of small talk, fight another dozen monsters then 60 pages of nothing. Lets his employees fight mobs steals a percentage of their lot while never once sharing his own, one mob fight another 50 pages of repeat small talk.
Might as well add in the males are fighters lady are weak delicate flowers that need to cook and clean im not even a feminist but this was ridiculous. I could say more but whats the point this story is ok but needs severe editing and cutting out pointless bullshit and 90 % of what passes for romance

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