Worthy listen with a hiccup or two

There are some very clear Kingkiller Chronicle Influences throughout the book, but it is well written and very well performed. Much of the story only getting 4 stars is how transparent and predictable it is, but it's still a fun adventure I'll continue with the next one.

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A good story but far from great.

Interesting story, useless protagonist, promising world. Plot is a bit scattered. 3 out of Five.

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Excellent Story, Totally Worth a Read

I was wary picking this up since a lot of people had difficulty with the main character, as well as many thinking the first half of the book was a slog. I can see how they would be frustrated with Michael, but I believe his flaws truly make the book, and I didn't find the story to be slow or a slog at all, I was halfway done on the first day! So I'd definitely give it a read

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Excellent book. Great Start New Series

I was looking for a new series within SciFi and liked the idea of magic meeting the introduction of gunpowder. I enjoyed this book and strongly recommend it

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Author shows promise but needs to work on a lot.

I wanted to like this book, granted that's partially just because it had a Sanderson quote on the front. The majority of this book isn't horrible, unfortunately there are bits of it that are, and those bits are arguably some of the more important ones.

The main character feels like Martell tried to make something new by taking pieces of several different archetypes and combining them. Unfortunately the result feels very forced as it lacks the rest of what makes those archetypes work.

Forced is actually a good word to describe the entirety of the book. The plot is runs by periodic reveals and twists, but there is little to no foreshadowing so they all feel hollow (pun intended). The magic system and world building are interesting, but again lack the refinement needed to really allow you to get invested.

All in all I probably won't be buying the second book when it comes out, but I hope he continues writing. Given some more time and practice I think Martell has promise.
Edit: actually I guess if I want him to keep writing I probably should buy the second book. Here's to hoping practice makes perfect!

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Good story, confusing narration.

Nick Martell mostly does a good job with the story. Just like any appropriately complex fantasy world, this one takes some time to adjust to upon starting a book, and that is amplified by the extremely unique magic system. Well worth reading. There are aspects of the writing that need work, but this is very good for a first effort. The main character is mildly infuriating on a regular basis, but it really seems to be intentional.

In a welcome departure from the last couple books I've started and not gotten through, the main characters are not horribly misogynistic or abusive. I don't get why we seem to usually put up with that stuff in high fantasy, and this series so far is an indication that it's not a requirement in order to have a good story.

However, if I had it to do over, I'd have simply bought the book to read. All the characters from a given country in the world basically have the same voice- even male and female characters sound the same. John Skelley seems to have one "dialogue" voice and one "narration" voice, and it gets very confusing to follow which character is actually speaking a given sentence. A lot of attention must constantly be paid to the order of things- more so than most books. Martell's writing does mitigate this somewhat, as his character voices are quite strong. Once you get used to the characters, it's fairly easy to identify which character was speaking purely based on their language patterns, even if the narrator is using the same speaking voice.

Overall, worth a credit- it's far better than many audiobooks, but you may find yourself (as I did) rewinding occasionally to make sense of a piece of dialogue.

Also, I think it's worth mentioning that I came to buy this audiobook and experience the story entirely because of Nick Martell's appearance on Brandon Sanderson's livestream a few weeks ago. In case anyone from the publisher is reading this, please take notes- authors talking to fans and answering questions over the internet is very valuable and entertaining.

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Stick with it.

It’s a little bit slow in the beginning and there is a ton of information and characters. I almost put it down but I’m glad I stuck with it. I truly believe this could be the start of a fantastic epic. I’m excited for more!

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Really wondering who is giving 5 stars to 2 star books

The book starts out pretty good, but slowly gets worse and worse. Trae’s character, brother included, could have been removed from the book entirely with no consequence. There are a lot of other little things in the book that don’t make sense, but the thing that annoys me most is that if the main character didn’t exist, the story would end the same. Nothing actually gets resolved in the end. Would not recommend. Also, the main character having magic was irrelevant to the story completely.

The world building is pretty good though.

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Not big on the narrator, but the story is good.

There are definitely some clunky scenes here and there, but overall I still enjoyed the book. I like the potential of the magic system and the societies that form around it.
I think that Martell could have played with how magic influences the society and how the society influence the magic a little bit more.
Michael Kingman definitely needs some work, but to me it seems more like he is just trying to do his best but keeps making all of the wrong choices, and I can relate to that on some levels.
Some of the dialogue is a little clunky. A lot of, "I am going to kill you when I get the chance," but that never really seems to be fulfilled.

I was not a fan of the narrator. I don't have a very good memory (part of what drew me to this book) and I rely alot on the narration to keep track of who is who, but Skelley seems to only have 3 or 4 different voices that all sound generally the same.

Just got the second book, I can't wait to see how the story, the author, and the narrator grow.

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Slow build, but great payoff

It took a little while for me to feel immersed in the story, but I'm glad I stuck it out. Atypical fantasy setting, diverse characters, interesting magic system, a plot with many threads that will keep you guessing, and a solid and satisfying ending. This is Martell's debut novel, so I imagine they will only get better from here!

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