Logical Dialogue, Illogical Plot

The pleasure of this book is in the world building. The amount of detail that went into crafting each alien species, their home world, culture, appearance, etc. is truly breathtaking. Throughout the book, there are encyclopedia-style journal entries about the varies races. While interesting to a certain degree, they’re also a bit overwhelming, with more information than a reader can realistically be expected to remember. There are even entries about species not included in the story… just for fun?

What isn’t fun is the story itself. The characters are flat and boring. With a few exceptions, they all act like robots. There is only one “embodied computer,” but the dialogue is so stiff and formal you’d think they were all androids. Everyone is very logical with full and proper reasoning behind all their actions (which they explain in excruciating detail to each other). Somebody save me! Maybe fictitious aliens talk like that, but humans don’t. Only Lewis Nenda (spelling? I listened on Audible) has any real personality. Everyone else feels like a clone of the embodied computer, E. C. Tally (sp?).

Similarly painful is the plot. The basic arch is utterly derivative of 2001: A Space Odyssey, and the original Star Trek movie. A crew of unlikely companions is on the search for the Builders: the ancient race that predates all others and has ceded the universe with artifacts. So, naturally, they embark on a quest to find the Builders and question them.

Sure, it’s been done before, but you can always put a fresh, new, interesting spin on things, right? Wrong. After all the exhaustive world building, the plot devolves into an intergalactic battle royale. Even the utterly ridiculous set up wouldn’t have been so bad if not for the insipid logic behind it.

As explained in the story, the Builders are millions of years old. After struggling with the singularly difficult question as to the long-term future of the universe, the Builders decide they need fresh blood: a different perspective in order to provide new insights. However, rather than incorporate the uniqueness of all species, the genius Builders decide to make all the other aliens fight to the death until only one survives.

Anyone else see any glaring logical flaws in this plan (which, by the way, took the Builders millennium to come up with)? Hmm, for starters, why would you limit yourselves to input from just one species? As the saying goes, wisdom comes in many forms. More aliens = more chances of finding an answer. There are some lame excuses offered about the Builder’s “unique” logic but none of it passes muster.

Second, a death match… really? Just because one species can kill the others, doesn’t mean it has the best insights to help you solve “The Problem.” Maybe if there were tools and science involved, but this is just a bunch of aliens in on an empty space station… and, fight! Dumb, dumb, dumb.

There are other plot holes as well, like how a species of geniuses devolved into morons by thinking too much. Oh, and all of the Builder “science” is so over-the-top ridiculous it might as well be fantasy. At least try to give us a semi-plausible explanation for disappearing floors, gravity wells far in excess of mass, every alien race breathing the same air, and traveling 30,000 light years in the blink of an eye. Don’t get me started on the swirling vortex that sucks people down into an intergalactic portal. Call it what it is, a giant space toilet.

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grand fun

I completely enjoyed this book. loads of fun and perfect balance of action and exploration.
I'll certainly look for more by his author.

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Hard sci-fi with a hint of humor

I liked this book even better than the first in the series. The same characters are involved, and have been further developed, and the mystery as to who/what the Builders are was tantalizingly developed. I think there is a little more character development and a little less space-tech in this installment. Well, maybe not... the first of the book is quite techy, but the story does become more about social/species interactions as the story progresses. There is even a little - well-done - hint of humor in this installment.

There are several alien species in this series, and they are distinct and believable. They are also interesting and creatively written. I like the "excerpts" from the alien directory which matter-of-factly describes each alien type, without interrupting the story itself.

The plot in this book is concluded at the end, but it's clear there's a future book in the series since we still haven't met the Builders, or found out what happened with the "bad" aliens. Or how the "Question" the Builders have will be answered.

The narrator is good; I think he does a better job in this book than the first in the series. There is no graphic violence/sex/language. I am starting the next in the series now.

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good

good book, excellent storyline, good reader, Geoffrey does an excellent job. highly recommend. good price.

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Heritage Universe series volume 2

This is the second volume of a 4 part series. The first hour is a recap of the major plot points of the first novel. I enjoyed the essays on the various intelligent species of the galaxy. The plot is farfetched but the use of science, particularly physics, and biology is fascinating.
I listened to Summertide the first book in the series and really enjoyed it. This one was good but not quite as believable. Overall a pleasant way to spend 9+ hours.
I look forward to hearing Transcendence: Book 3 of The Heritage Universe and then Convergence (the whole series is available from Audible).

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I Love This Universe

The characters and aliens and wonders in these books are both fanciful and believable, and lead you from scene to scene in fascination and anticipation. One of my favorite series.

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Great followup to Summertide

You got to view Summertide as just an intro. Divergence is very good; but you won't understand in unless your hear Summertide 1st.

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Better even than book 1

I like this second book in the series even more than the first book (Summertide). I liked them both, but this one for me had more interesting things going on, and the character development in this one seemed more involving. The narrator for this series does a good job in my opinion especially for Lewis Nenda, and you get much more development of that character in this book.

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Exceptional

Nothing else is quite like it. A very original story with enough detail to form a mental image easily. The pace is fast.

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More Hard Sci-fi

As I said in a previous review, Charles Sheffield wrote HARD sci-fi (His passing is a loss for the Science Fiction Community). His worlds and aliens are detailed and different. He didn't simply take common events and give them strange names, or swap guns for "Lasers". His Characters and planets have depth and detail.

He also sticks to the laws of physics, and when he DOES breaks those laws, it's with explanations about why it may be broken in this case.

Being an Engineer, I like that in a good Sci-fi story. Sheffield was also VERY in touch with human nature, and didn't shy away from controversial topics.

Again, Each book in this series is better than the last, and the narration is VERY well done. I also like the occasional paraphrases from some of Heinlein's Works.

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