This tutorial is about writing more clearly for creative writing and fiction and when editing writing it's a good idea to ask yourself have I already presented this information because what happens a lot of times is two you know one or more paragraphs before it's common to have already written the information you're presenting in a different form as you're trying to get your story on the paper it comes out it usually comes out jumbled so when you're editing run through and one of the best ways to greatly clarify your prose is to ask yourself have I already presented this information and usually what happens is you'll remember that a paragraph or so ahead of time you already said something kind of similar and you can take a look at those two sentences and realize that if you move one sentence over to where the other one is at you can change them around a little bit maybe turn them both into one sentence or maybe turn them you know rewrite them so that they both work well together and then you can go to the place where you extracted that sentence and rearrange it and what you'll end up with are prose that run more smoothly and have greater impact and then you'll have as you go back and reread the story you'll see that the ideas are presented in an order that makes more sense and a lot of the times in you know in the heights of inspiration you're not thinking about ordering your ideas and presenting them in an orderly fashion and as you want to go back and edit them it can take some time to then go and rearrange to present your ideas in an orderly fashion but if you just ask yourself have I already presented this information that will usually start the process of of reordering rearranging and rewriting the information that will more naturally flow and make more sense and be easier for your audience to to consume.