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Who is MC in story?

Revisado: 04-15-25

Great story, great series. Only issue I have is this Sindra's pack/harem or Gabe's. Author let's Sindra have her way too much for not being a pack leader or even the prime. I mean I honestly could give a crap about the lust in Sindra's bond as he is getting intimate with Brenya. Author seems to put Sindra upfront and in control in most if not all sexual encounters...it seems if MC was true pack leader Sindra would defer to Gabe for permission...example being scene where Brenya and Sindra were alone and she wants to "test" her bird sister(ie have sex) ...doing so with Brenya( who hasn't been with Gabe yet and also without "her packmasters" permission seems to run against the whole Gabe in charge which should be the them.....that being said can't wait for next book

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Voice changes and MC issues

Revisado: 04-09-25

can't say I liked the voice changes. Also can the MC finally start acting like the head of a harem/raid/guild and be a man. Also des character still annoyingly thinks she is in charge...makes me slightly dislike her character. Also considering how Fayeth has been in undying love with MC since they met...I can't see how she would suddenly want to leave him and return to elven world. That shouldn't be a reason to expand the harem in a book, it can expand without other members leaving.

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Great Story

Revisado: 04-03-25

my only concern is Dez (dezmona) is a bit annoying.Her main goal in this book seems to be "nailing" the elven princess like I said who is in charge? Who is the mc? This is not her harem its the mc's. Author makes dez to controlling and harem willing and the mc too unwilling to expand harem. i mean wtf. MC is suppose to be incharge but Dez seems to act like she is in charge...her character arc sometimes makes me want to stop reading. Also Dez claims to be so "in love" with mc but seems to want to "bang" all the members of his harem more than him...doesn't make that much sense.

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Your killing me

Revisado: 04-02-25

mc is cursed and one of his women takes on the brunt of it...and your telling me he wouldn't be consumed by finding out everything about curses..like I don't know how they are given( by touch etc) he wouldn't start replaying all the weird things that happened in past few days like i dont know touching a book the gave you a charge that a "bloodwrath" had...hint hint that should be priority number 1....otherwise another great book in the series

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MAKE it make sense

Revisado: 04-02-25

For basically 2 books now mc (Jake) knows arch lord mathis is an evil dick....but during a crucial point at the end Jake is gonna listen to mathis' advice and tgink he is helping...that would never happen....otherwise great story and great characters cant wait for next

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RUSHED

Revisado: 03-26-25

I believe the author rushed this series to the end and in doing so hurt the quality of this last book and the series

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consistency???

Revisado: 03-24-25

so question to author do you keep track of what things you say in previous books. in first book Scotie the giantess stated she is not interested in woman but only in the 1st few chapters Scotie is making flirtatious overtures to all the mc's current female companions like a damn predator?????

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Made MC a bit annoying

Revisado: 03-20-25

Great story for most part, I think mc could be better, example he gets "tricked" into an arena fight against a blood elf who they lied an is more powerful than him but also made it a death match. MC wins but feels bad about killing someone that wanted to kill him and do harm to his two female companions..come on he shouldn't give killing him a second thought...instead he laments on it like a idiot......kill or be killed my dude its simple really

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great series so far, but make it make sense

Revisado: 03-13-25

Writer needs to remember certain things to make story flow better. Example when Drew sends pantos units of his undead army back to sanctuary for help instead of oh I dont know communicating with his goddess instantly who is back at sanctuary to send help?

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needs to make sense

Revisado: 02-14-25

did not think after all yhe babble mc gave about loving all his girls equal....he immediately seems to favor Haru....doesnt mind she calls him by true name but wont tell the 4 girls he has been with and have been loyal to him his true name also marks Haru 1st with his true name before any of his 4 original...i believe mc is nothing but a hypocrite not the benevolent master that treats his women equally

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