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gahhh Honour

Revisado: 03-27-25

Why did it have to end so soon, I was so ready for it to keep going!

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Short, fun, Vivid

Revisado: 10-24-24

Honour is an excellent writer who doesn't let her systems get in the way of the story, her dialogues are good and characters and motivations feel very good.

This story is a little shallower than ATS but it's definitely fun and has plenty of room to grow.

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There are a couple ideas but the writing is rough

Revisado: 07-19-23

the largest issue with this book is probably the character dialogue, its really really bad and it last a long time
the other issue is there isn't a main character, you follow the "main character" for 2 pages then we time skip 10 years, so your never dealing with any challenges or solutions, just skipping to scenes where the characters are for one moment in time then hereing a list of achievements from the past 10 years

Outside the virtual world is much of the same, the CEO of the world is kinda a neat character but I'm reading the last chapter now and still don't know whats up with him, you skip from stressful scene to celebration, several times he tries some kind of machacnation that fails but everything works out somehow anyway, evocative but hard to follow




There is way to much techonobabble

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No issues from me with the narrator but the story

Revisado: 07-17-23

Main character never has to deal with any hardship, his "class" in the video games turns out to be the strongest
Secretly the grandest master of chess but still wierdly cheats to secure wins against much lower elo players at the park?

Locked in a dungeon and underleveled? np your new familiar spell is digger
Going up against a too strong monster? np its frustrated with all the other players and agrees to talk with no hesitation

Our genius MC never has too think his way out of any situation and theirs no comedy to justify that with

And unfortunately the game world their in sounds ridiculously boring, their no "game aspects" its like a work simulator, all the players groan at every irritating quest that gets in their way

if it existed in our world it would be a work training simulator + adult sim
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which it also is in this book, why does the game world need to reference that this world has adult sexy time opportunities and strip the characters so often? It's not played for erotica it's just kinda ... stuck in there

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Not a story! Guide to help game Masters fight

Revisado: 04-08-20

And it's fantastic
This works perfect for the Busy DM who doesn't have time to bget abhook shipped, flip through pages and all that stuff.
Each chapter in audible is split to a different npc which is perfect !

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esto le resultó útil a 12 personas

Suzy Jackson brings back a brilliant performance

Revisado: 12-01-19

But unfortunately, the book itself is... well is fine. It's not the typical sanderson insane quality, it's just... okay.

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I would rate it higher if I could

Revisado: 09-26-18

what an incredible gripping story, it's like hidden figures mixed with the Martian and it's fabulous.

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can I give performance 6 Stars?

Revisado: 09-19-18

a very heavy but very fulfilling conclusion. if I could rate the narrator any higher I absolutely would amazing performance

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esto le resultó útil a 2 personas

cute book, fun visuals, good casual read.

Revisado: 11-20-17

the narrator does a really good job what she's trying to do, unfortunately some of her lines are soorta cringy but not that bad. The letters from when she was 12 are painful.

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at any point in this book does anything happen?

Revisado: 08-18-17

you know how a summary candle even the greatest most exciting books feel bland and uninteresting? This books take a lovely magic Kingdom and then writes the entire book in that boring voice I kept reading on going maybe now something is going to happen. no? well for sure this chapter. nope. never it simply does not pick up. such a fun interesting idea and it reads like a law document.

Dick Hill did a fine job and did decent, distinctive voices for everybody but for love of God the music at the end of every chapter? Why? It's and old recording the the audio is kinda scratchy.

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