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Twist at the end

Revisado: 03-30-25

Great and unexpected twist at the end of the story. Good way to close it out.

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Great to have Scott writing horror again!

Revisado: 10-11-23

Great to have Scott writing horror again!

I can’t wait for the next book! Hope to see it soon!

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Last chance in space

Revisado: 03-25-23

Our last chance and some luck for humanity in soace. Worth listening to this story.

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Great twists.

Revisado: 02-27-23

Always a different storyline developing with cliffhanger at the end. Can’t wait for season 2.

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Great short story.

Revisado: 01-30-23

Good character development. It reminded me a lot of aliens the series. I’m not sure if the Euwanee part was supposed to be a crossover. But the creatures were different than the aliens. Overall a good book.

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Edge of seat story

Revisado: 01-25-23

Loved the book. Listens to the whole thing at once. It’s now 4 am. I lost track of time. I hope they do another mystery.

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Starts out slow. But gets up to speed within chapters

Revisado: 01-22-23

Starts out slow. But gets up to speed within a couple chapters. Give it time, Nice ending.

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Nice ending to a long series. Adrian did a great job taking readers into the variant world.

Revisado: 01-22-23

But, every story doesn’t have to end with hugs and kisses.

Of coarse, that’s just my opinion.

Adrian is a great storyteller.

I strongly suggest you pick up The Sixth Law Audible audio book for closure to the Kiwi Variant story.

The series is great. But, start from book 1 if your new to the Variant world.

The Extinction Cycle will give you a great leap into the Variant timeline.

Original story by Nicholas Sansbury Smith.

The following is an idea. Or a hopeful request.

I wish a writer would take the chance and end on a doom and gloom ending.

Actually, the perfect ending could have been both.

A choose your own adventure style on the last 3 chapters.

That would be completely original and incredible! As far as I know.

I would love it!

Hope you read this Nicholas Sansbury Smith!

You are the right author to start this new Final Countdown style of writing.

I don’t know what else to call it.

Adrian, I’m looking forward to whatever storyline you take on for your next project.

Sincerely,

D- a dedicated reader.

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Incredible storyline! Best in Hell Diver’s series so far!

Revisado: 06-24-22

The only disappointment is that I have to wait so long for book 10 of the saga.

If you have never heard of a Hell Diver, I strongly suggest that you start with “Hell Divers-book 1”, by Nicholas Sansbury Smith.

He has also written the Extinction series, Trackers series, E-Day series and Orbs.

They are all page turners with great cliff hangers at the end of each book. You will loose track of time as NSS transports you into his worlds.

Thank you NSS!

Sincerely,
D.Morrow

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Revamp of The Thing

Revisado: 10-12-21

The end could have been better. I get the cliff hanger, but I’m not sure this book will have a sequel.

A better ending might have led you into a populated area with the key character infected. But, still having all of his smarts. Infected and ready to battle the outbreak.

The chimera affecting the population differently would be a good twist for “Chimera 2 - A Changing World.”

Almost like the movie DOOM. Good vs. bad. Hero’s vs. bad men playing God.

I’m not trying to kill the story. I just think that a lot of the story may have been hacked away by the final couple edits.

People that read this style of book, don’t need the dumbed down version for the general public. That’s not who is going to read or listen to it.

Most of your sci-fi readers will have a good general understanding of the science behind the subject. And if we don’t, we pause to look it up.

Maybe 1 in 10 people asked on the street will be able to explain , “What is a Chimera?”

Nine out of 10 people will think it’s a new item on the Taco Bell menu.

Just a suggestion. Really think about who your readers are and who’s listening. Sci-fi readers want detail. Not MOS explanations taking a chapter.

I’m not trying to be a troll. I could personally never write a book. I have great respect for authors. It takes a lot of time and patience to put a good story to paper.

I just think that maybe the author knows their story and the editors think they know better.

I do love Michael McBride books. Great author. So I would give a sequel story to Chimera a chance to geek out and destroy the world thru human ignorance.

Happy Reading.

D

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