OYENTE

Steven

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Great story and narration albeit with a few flaws

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-21-25

really enjoyed the read through but a few things stuck out to me as weird. I feel like Malach’s line of thinking could be explained a bit more in why he prefers to have a quieter life. throughout the whole story, constantly emphasizes this but i don’t see a strong indication of why he is thinking that. another thing that bothered me a bit was the jarring transitions between the two stories. without revealing too much, it felt like just as momentum was building up in a character’s story, we were ejected back to the other character’s arc. i also feel like the side characters could be more fleshed out via some more interactions with each other or the main character. i am saying all of this but i truly did enjoy the story and i am waiting eagerly for the next audiobook. keep up the good work author and narrator!

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