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Interesting storyline

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-16-25

The storyline and plot are interesting and unique. I do wish there was more backstory and explanation of the storyline and the MCs history. The MC isn’t OP but he’s not weak either. He does make some dumb choices that hopefully he grows out of in the next book. The clingy gf trope is one I could do without but over all the characters are likable and unique. The narrator left a lot to be desired.

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Poor writing

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1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-14-25

The storyline and writing are horrible. There is no plot development. There is too much stat/level interaction. It is used as a crutch to explain away stuff in the story. The story is dark with some seriously messed up parts. The girls are one Dimensional at best. Relationship building is nonexistent, stuff just happens with no build up.

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Plot twist

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-12-25

The book picks up where the first one left off with a storyline that grabs you and keeps your attention, with just enough unpredictability to keep everything interesting. The characters have depth and the relationships don’t seem forced.

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Going down hill

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-10-25

The plot and storyline are starting to go downhill. While I understand, not wanting to make the MC overpowered, he also doesn’t need to be too weak. My biggest issue is the MC is turning into a Simp. He’s starting to let the women control who he’s with, and he starts to turn down others for no valid reason, despite contradicting himself and saying how much he wants them.

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Refreshing

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-01-25

The storyline is very interesting. The MC is not overpowered, but at the same time it’s not weak. He does not act like he’s scared or confused about female which is an issue you can find in the genre sometimes. The character development flows naturally the narrators have a good range. I’m looking forward to the next book.

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Quality drop

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-26-25

This installment was a drop in quality compared to the other books. The fight scenes go on for too long, and there isn’t much storyline in this book. Majority of it seems to be filler. The ending is what saved the book. The narration change was a poor choice. A lot of the female characters now sound the same. The MC also seems to act as if he does not want the affections of the girls at time, he acts as if it’s an annoying.

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Great character development

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-21-25

The story continues where the first book left off with great character development and organic relationships. In the MC isn’t weak, but he’s also not overpowered. The plot of the story continues to be good. I look forward to the next book.

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Drop in quality

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-20-25

Unfortunately, this book continues to have the problems that the second book had of not finishing certain points of the storyline for example take Petras personality and things she was comfortable with. There was a 360 with no explanation. The general principle of the story is good but unfortunately lots of details are looked over or poorly explained. There are loads of plot holes. I won’t be continuing the series.

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Fast paced

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-16-25

The story hit the ground running picking rup where the first book left off. The MC is still a good mix of confident and humble. Parts of the storyline seem rushed and not well explained, take the magic system for example, we still don’t know much about it. Some of the character development is also rushed. There are characters who seem to have key roles that after a few chapters just disappear. Overall, the book is good but the first one was better. I’m hoping the third book fixes the issues that have popped up in this one.

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Great read

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-13-25

This story is a great read. The MC is not overpowered you get to see his development. He’s not the typical weak or whiny MC that you see in this genre. The character development is good and the relationships are well formed.

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