Dani P.

The Last Chapter in a Fun Adventure

Revisado: 04-02-24

Not much to say, a nice ending to a whimsical character driven story, that I throughly enjoyed.

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Cool Concept Bad Execution

Revisado: 03-15-23

I made it roughly half way through with alot of skipping after chapter 4. For about the first third of the book he does nothing but sit in his room complaining, nothing really happens and progression is non existent. The main character is incredible whiney, despite the flashbacks trying to showing how hard his first life was, it is how ever hard to care about his past when you just don't care about the mc.

Overall cool idea brought down by flashbacks you don't care about, overly long inner monologs, info/lore dumps one after another repeatedly, and an mc that never feels quite right for his supposed past.

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Pretty Good

Revisado: 06-11-21

Chapter 1&2 were a bit annoying with how adamantly and frequently the MC claimed they were just in a dream but save one other spot (where the meta 4th wall joke with the doll just didn't work) the story was solid and made me interested to see what happens next, it's worth the read.

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Mediocre, Not Terrible but Not Good

Revisado: 01-30-21

Not bad exactly, had an interesting premise, but a cool idea can't save bad writing. There were lots of plot holes in this book and everything was over the top and unrealistic certainly not the worst book ever, but story was poorly thought out.

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Good Story, not for me.

Revisado: 01-20-21

The Story of this book was really interesting, that said I can not understate how much I hate the stupid turn based gimmick of this book. First if I was playing full immersive vr identical to real life with turn based pvp I would quit, Second it makes the dex stat useless, Third it actually disadvantages a group but the book trys to make it seem like it helps them, and etc. I mean, I wanted to like this book, but I can't even finish it (was about half through) the whole turn based combat just felt really dumb and like a way to differentiate this from other litrpg s, it's sad because the story was good and there aren't many civ building litrpg that go beyond a town or city and this one seemed like it might.

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Enjoyable and light hearted

Revisado: 01-20-21

really liked the book had some really funny moments but that ending im not sure if I'm annoyed or amused at the meta joke lol, hope the next book comes soon.

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One of the few good litrpgs I've read lately.

Revisado: 01-16-21

I really liked this book. Ben was relatable even if he didn't always make the best decisions, there's alot of funny moments and it plays around with some tropes and ideas that you see everywhere which I thought was cool, that said it can be a little meta I enjoy that kind of thing personally, but I thought it should be mentioned.

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Not Bad

Revisado: 12-12-20

If you have nothing else to listen to give this a go. Overall the experience was mixed. Mostly it seems things were overly explained and I found my mind wandering to other thoughts then having to rewind to relisten to the last paragraph. The MC seemed just a little whiney early on and the slow pacing of the story doesn't lend itself to dungeon crawls which was a large part of the book. On a positive note the game system itself was indepth and interesting and the world lore seemed neat but I couldn't care about the plot much.

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From okay in book 1 to terrible in book 2

Revisado: 11-24-20

I don't mind romance or harem side plots, but four hours in and the only things we've done is talk about his stupid harem politics and how unhappy with his life he is. He just whines while changing nothing, idk if I'll be able to finish this book but if I do ill update my review.

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Fun light-hearted adventure

Revisado: 11-21-20

I love both fantasy books and comedies, this is a great blend of the two. The story has a good balance between humor and plot. The next books maintain this trend, maybe leaning slightly more toward the story later on, they stay just as entertaining if not more so as you get to know the characters better and more are introduced. Overall I'd say it's just a good book for anyone looking to spend a couple hours laughing at/and with 2 Necromancer, an Elf, and a Bureaucrat.

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