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it was not quite what i thought

Revisado: 04-19-23

maybe if you are super into ants and have an interest in litrpg but are Not an actual experience rpg or pnp player. i think.

the premise was good but i got bored very fast and the evolution and system i have all seen done so much better. it didn't hold my interest for long, but it could be worse, so i guess not its just not for me

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clearly it's for a younger more naive crowd

Revisado: 04-19-23

i can just conclude this is written for young teenagers from young teenagers and that's not me ^^

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it's boring, standard mc type A but in armor skin

Revisado: 01-24-23

i found it boring how fast the armor takes on every good mc ever boring persona IMMIDIATEDLY.
not only that it is apparently not interesting in evolving instead it want to be a goodie mc type A... its forced and honestly it becomes annoying, the amount of attempt to put in a weird harem vipe with EVERY female companion is really odd, and how the ARMOR responds as if it was a human teenage boy is weird and akward, also how the females act like teenage girls from our time and world is wierd.

the story seemed really boring, i got halfway through and little had happened mc had missed Every chance for evolution or gain and it had become kinda a bad romance story of the slow but skilled kid tumbling through a world he doesnt únderstand while becomming the hero that saves his beloved friends....
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its just not what i was promised with an mc that was a human eating armor who could gain ability and knowledge from all it eated... if it eat its master it would immidiatedly start with high lvl conjuration, how much more would you like to read that story instead of this....

well the premise was enough to lure me in, but dissapointed

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Many problems.

Revisado: 08-03-22

The mc is too "human" meaning he is nothing but a human and he very much act like a kinda dumb uneducated person, so it is what the writing says it should be; just too much of it... is quite stupid, and acts surprised over everything, act dumb, force exposition bs. etc.... its just bad, and i HATE how the narrator makes the dragon sound like this would be the worst dragon voice and speech pattern ever, it does sound like some fat old 40+ year-old loser with pants hanging down to show his hairy asscrack.... THAT'S the picture in my mind every time his dialog is spoken... it sucks...
people don't want a dragon to feel the personality of a 40-year-old loser... they want a dragon personality or at least something similar...

besides that the narrating of the dragon's dialog is too fast, sounds nervous or awkward. the ratman is talking like a high elf and one can wonder how the fck this rat is talking like this??? normally they wouldn't know enough words to create a full sentence.

the mc is lowering his head or trying to have the minions not worship much, like EVERY MC EVER! in these stories... so yer mc type generic A plotline behavior...

the system of base lost my interest immediately as an entire chapter was droned on about stuff in the system which honestly is pointless; just show me as it is relevant for the story, no reason to tell me about your entire RPG system; honestly, it makes it worse bc the systems always kinda sucks, so the less one knows about it the better; just let's hear the effects etc. as it is relevant.

it has that disgusting smell of "WE ARE ALL EQUAL FORM THE LOWLIEST RAT TO THE STRONGEST DRAGON!!! ALL CLAP AND YELL IN JOY AS WE ALL ACCEPT THIS! ENTIRELY!!! BC PLOT!".....
.... as well as the entire "Monsters are just misunderstood highly educated geniuses with insanely high morals, ethics, intelligence, and good behavior; so it's just bc others misunderstood but now that mc listens to their cries and treats them better they suddenly all become magically good and morale; as they cry "WHY MUST IT RESULT IN WAR" ...... it's so fcking dumb...
it makes it vastly worse when lowtier creatures such as ratlings are acting arrogant and giving attitude to a BLACK DRAGON!, it just shows an astonishing lack of basic understanding of the world author is writing in; no way in hell would a ratling do anything but shake in terror and piss/shit itself if standing in front of a black dragon NO MATTER the situation; it's simply the basic pressure and terror of a dragon (most rpg systems you have to roll for TERROR upon seeing a dragon, and in many this roll can make you literally fall over Dead by a heart attack; thats vs adventure players of high lvl, these ratlings are the lowest monster, just seeing the dragon is enough to make them worship in terror;
BUT NOT HERE! here we have arrogant minions who do not care about the rules and can ignore the effect of a black dragon bc, honestly, shtty story writing

I found myself becoming bored very fast as it's so slow and mc needs to narrate himself or ask moron question to make minions narrate stupid stuff constantly, just wasting time on having to show a reaction to everything; also always does who can't figure out how to use it that gets it;
I wanted; DRAGON MC!!! as in DRAGON behavior.
* arrogant, narcissistic, selfish, self-satisfying dragon behavior and thoughts.
* focus on capturing princesses for bragging, increasing hoardes of treasures, acting really dragon greedy, petty while wielding amazing powers, and being a true powerhouse forcing lower races into slavery and servitude. being extremely fast thinking having preplanned every scenario it believes can happen so it never ends in a "this is dumb" situation etcetc.

but honestly, I feel I got the direct opposite with a whole bunch of dumb lvl stuff that there was no reason to even have, the system does nothing for the story and just adds another "meeh" thing that is not fleshed out or needed :/
and the dragon is so damn useless compared to actual dragons in almost every system existing, but this dragon is just nerfed hard even with a magic bs system it kinda sucks -_-

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Bait and Switch

Revisado: 08-01-22

Bait and Switch;

start out strong; then change mc into ”every generic mc type A”; when he becomes a dumb simp drooling after some crappy fmc; while being the picture-perfect ”good guy”...

his supposed to be a lich, ow sry a emm.. can't remember what he call them an ”undead creature who need to eat the souls of other to survive” ehem aka a LICH; but he got Twillight syndrome and is a SPARKLING LICH who totally look, smell, seems like a human even to priests -_-

his Eviiil goooal! Is to make a mass produced potion that can make ALL people Immortal!! and totally! Realistic that such a thing can be made -_-
sigh, yer its fcking ridiculess... and thats the entire plot around him...
a necromancer that want nothing else than to bring good to all people and make all people live forever (as if it isn't bullshit enough to be able to bind a living fully sentient soul to an undead and have it function 'forever' at full intelligent -_- fcking dumb)...

the mc is GOOD GUY! SIMP! As always in these; he can't kill anyone female, he can't kill anyone worth mentioning, he ONLY kills to push the plot...

the other characters around him are... frankly mentally handicapped ESPECIALLY the FMC, who is pushed sooooo hard into mc's arms it feels like the author want them to become one person -_-
it's just fcking dumb.

Also apparently NO ONE but mc has the SLIGHTEST TINIEST! Bit of self-preservation or survival instinct; how ANY of these people, especially the princes lived beyound the age of surviving the river at home is beyound bs writing considering their insane suicidal behaviour all the way through.

Characters ONLY survive because of absolutely RIDICULOUS amount of xmachina (think superhero lvl of xmachina).
As example; you are in a cave, you are at LEAST 20 meters under the ground, and the cave systems seems to go under the city or close to; and now you use ”EARTHQUAKE”.... shall we just talk about what happens to you in a STONE cave 20+ meter under ground when an earthquake hits hard enough to make the cave collapse to crush a DRAGON???...
first of you are 100% DEAD! It's not a discussion; this reminded me of mount bullsht from my own groups play; a concept when a player is just fcking rules to the point its utterly destroying the game for everyone (players thinking ”i built the immortal built of bullsht rules and now i am untouchable”), the gm can go ”you got hit by a mountain, you instantly get crushed to dead by its millions of tons of magic+physical attack, you are instant dead”...
the weight is roughly 1450-1700 kilo's per M3, you are crushed by at bare minimum 20+´meter thick stone on top of you; even going with the lowest weight possibly you are holding up 4x1m x 20 height=80x1500kilo's= 120 TONS of stones; at realistic you are holding up for ALL the people so around 1.200 to 3.000 TONS of stone falling on your shield adding extreme power to it.

So your shield can withstand over 1.500 TONS of weight force+.
Ok FINE ignore it; but what now? How are you moving thousinds of TONS of stone crushed on top of you? The very milisecond you remove the shield you ALL die instantly, crushed by thousinds of tons of stones falling;
you also only have like 20 minutes of air left; and the entire city above and miles around just got hit by an earthquack which would collapse buildings and kill lots of people; if the dungeon is below the city then you just killed most of the city as the entire ground collapse with Several meters of height without warning...
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the princess is dumb af, suicidal, and stupid, all her actions are braindead and makes no sense other than driving the plot.
Mc becomes worse than her before halfway mark ( i gave up like 6 hours in); as he without real reason decides to be the princesses little simp boy instead of focusing on his fcking task of getting material for his MASS PRODUCTION OF IMMORTAL ELIXIR which he wants EVERYONE to have; so fcking dumb.... but even within the premise mc would rather jerk around with this suicidal braindead princes than follow his Goal...
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the lvl system, magic tier system and system in general is utterly sht and means NOTHING!
A tier 3 mage is as powerful as a tier 8 mage;
a no mage can activate fcking tier 8 mass teleportation magic in but a moment from an ITEM -_-
anti-magic doesn't work when it is convenient for the story;
the tiers mean nothing as t7 spells are used by t3 mages, and T5-6 undead can easily be fought off by tier 3-4 princess group...

combat is Super badly written; meaning the author have no idea about most of it and didn't bother to even do a google search;
the main culprit of this, that i got to hear, was when Thousinds of rats where being held off with relative easy in the caves by a few mages …. …. like, go watch youtube just on extreme number of mice; we can't even stop these swarms with our technology today; wtf makes you think you stand a chance with sticks and stones and 2-5 second channelled spells??
a rat easily moves 10 meters before you cast the spell

combat with firespells in close quarters in a Cave system... first you would be completely blinded by the explosions for at least 5+ seconds every fireball.
Fire would suck up oxygen from the air creating a draft effect fueling smoke and fire on the rats; making the circle which drains the oxygen in the cave area around you (both lowering fire magic effect and making you dizzy or straight up pass out).

Using earthquack spells while 20+ meter under ground in a stone cave; etc dumb sht like this..
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there is just soo much wrong with it, its just not that good....
on top of ALL this comes the fact this is a COMPLETE BAIT AND SWITCH! Book; where it is sold on the mc being an evil necromancer; but in reality he is just a misunderstood good guy simp like EVERY other generic, dumb, boring, mc type A; just in another skin (which just makes it even dumber! As undeads literally cannot feel empathy or sympathy at all; they are literally psychopaths with NO understanding of your, or human emotions; but here all undeads are written like ANY other good guy character in EVERY other book, yes yes you try to be edgy with some of them but obviously they are all going to hold hand with mc and his simping at the end, and all are showing high amount of human like emotions etc... if you didnt say they were undead it would have changed nothing and no one would have known -_- )

so yer; maybe if you don't care about combat making sense; if you don't care about characters making any sense or having any intellect or want to life, maybe if you can ignore the lvl off bullsht on magic tiers, lvling power, etc; and also can deal with the bait and switch; then maybe it is for you.
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for me this is a 1star and honestly i am REALLY fcking annoyed that i was baited for 5+ hours before it became clear this is just another fcking shitty hero story about a lich who is TOTALLY human besides not needing sleep and having undead powers; who is misunderstood but Fight for Humans! And GOODNESS! And KINDNESS!! for ALL!!!!; while simping like and idiot and having terribly annoying, bs females around him for no fcking real reason other than PLOT;

so yer, i can't recommend this; and there is a LOT more that i havent mentioned (like mc's dumb argument about being afraid of giants comming to attack him... in his dungeon... where 5-7 meter giants obviously have to crawl all 4 to even get in -_- argh... its just so badly thought off. Just don't wasted your time on this bait and switch bs

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dragon is too much like a whining human -_-

Revisado: 07-31-22

as said the dragon becomes kinda like any other mc ever, there is still some fun wording etc. but in the end it comes down to the same actions and goals; it kinda sucks.

as for performance there is a lot of that wolf girl and the performance on her is honestly minus 1000 (she is incredibly annoyingly voiced. how can you think a main female should have the voice of a retarded mongol child??...
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just meeh...
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the idea was good author just completely forgot what he was writing and it became yet another generic "good guy mc doing good guy things for ridiculess reasons by the power of xmachina).
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also i HATE how fcking weak the dragon is; like a lvl 65+- absolutely WRACKED him, would have killed him if not for victor interfering.
silly ship (the weaponry is still normal magic btw-this they have always had) used by lvl 30's Absolutely DESTROYED him, and would have killed him if not for VICTOR THE SAVIOR OF THE DRAGON!! AT CONVENIENT XMACHINA WAYS!!!...
and later a group of like 12 people where EVERY attack mc dragon at dex 70ish! is dodged easily; EVERY attack of enemy hit mc and does THOUSIND!+ dmg PER HIT, it is fcking ridiculess.
EVERY attack mc hit either do NOTHING or "bc of story plot" oneshot whoever is hit; the consistancy is so fcking shit i can't help being pissed....
... also these ancient dragons would be extinct in a day when EVERY enemy they meet are "unable to ever exhaut their mana, FASTER, STRONGER, do 10x DMG, have 100% immunity to EVERYTHING, don't need oxygen to life, can see through all smokes, can ignore dragon fire, can survive getting crushed by a force of 15tons and over 600km/h= more than 350k joules of force roughly the same as 100gram tnt strapped on whoever he hits and continually applying heavy force with its weight alone" it is really fcking dumb how uselessly weak this dragon is; it feels like mc is a human fighting dragons, not the other way around;
he is also at 30 or 40+ intelligence (the author writes 60+ int, but since he is no more than lvl 40ish lvl and not int each lvl and started at 8, the author is just talking nonsense and got no clue what stats the mc has, even if he had int on EVERY lvl, which he didn't, he would be under 60);
either way, this mc is at 3x intelligent of a normal human and he still acts both in and out of combat like he had int 5, and NO instinctual ability to fight (seriously ANY none-braindead rpg pnp player would have ended the fight in under 4 secods -> first two seconds =mega fire-breath over the entire forest area; the dragon is 30 ish meters in size meaning its fire-breath is at least 100-300 meters in length and 50-150 meter in width; instantly setting fire to every big tree and making everything around extremely dry and burnable and instantly KILLS!!! anything that cannot easily sleep in lava without any dmg; this would kill EVERYONE but the golem, and make the rest FLEE! like crazy.
second 2-4 land on the fairy fcker instantly crushing him beneath more than 15 tons dragon+dragon attack+´600km/h speed crushing down onto this guy; instant kill;
using teleport is not possible as it has cast time, so it comes LAST in any combat round (aka you need to speak an entire chant! of words upwards of 5 seconds in length;
while i am just throwing a punch straight at your jaw, lets see who finishes first),
and his initiative is 100% much slower than the dragon so he's dead no matter what your gm tries to pull (yeeer sorry GM's if you allowed your player to play a 30! METERS ANCIENT DRAGON! then expect your basic low lvl npc bosses to be easy mode instant kill... i mean you gave a CR 28+ boss character to a player in a cr 10-15 game, OBVIOUSLY, he is going to absolutely Wrack everything you throw at him; but wasn't that the entire point of playing an Ancient Dragon cr 28 in a cr 10-15 game??? why else?)....

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..... it's fcking dumb...
even by the LOWEST standards an ANCIENT RED DRAGON! you need a FULL party of MAX lvl players or 1 lvl from max... but here a freaking soddy lvl 65 or a stupid ship with 2x30lvl's can wrack him;
his so fcking WEAK!!

also, this makes ZERO sense to his stats;
he is constantly fighting as if he is being outmaneuvered; which is ridiculous.
even without the stats boost from the system you are SLOOOW as a human, even max lvl, compared to an Ancient red dragon;
while the dragon is not fast as lightning, it is VERY fast, fast enough that any normal human won't even be able to notice it's attack before it has already landed; you need to be above mid lvl's to have the smallest chance to even react or it can literally kill your entire party before you can even take a turn; that's how fast it fcking is! like 5x lvl 75 characters goes into it's cave and in 1 combat round they are all dead, none of them got to even react to what happened... that's what would happen if some noobling took a cr 15 group into a fight with an ancient dragon (not hyperboling it could literally kill your entire group WITHOUT dragon-fire in a single combat-round and it 100% gets it's turn before anyone of your cr 15 characters, even that rogue who put EVERY point and feat into initiated).
the monster here is said to be 20+ meters long a Diplodocus at 26 meters is 15 tons (considering wings we can properly say this weight is about right).
now honestly considering a human weighing 80kilo's can do the amount of dmg these people do only bc of lvl which is max 1 stats per lvl (max 110strength'ish for a human), but mc is at close to 100 as base+ weight; even at BASE without levels, his impact power will absolutely instantly crush or seriously injure even a lvl 99+ (100=god, so new rules could apply);
instead he barely does dmg even with 30 levels on top of this when hitting an enemy.
next, there is DEX, again humans max at lvl 100 is 110dex, one of the enemies is a lvl 65 dex orientated class; assuming he got +1 dex EVERY level he is at 75 ish dex;
the mc is around 70dex when they fight- htf can he be running in circles with that kind of speed, massive size to dodge, insanely powerful attacks that will make even the wind around his claws, tail, and bites creates natural whirlwinds; yet he gets owned...
... and no matter what he fights he seems to be seen as "slow" even though his speed should be absolutely insane at dex close to 70.
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.... it's like his stats, etc. don't matter in combat with other classes; which just makes you sigh in annoyance;
.... also mc's hp is 5,8k as base, and victors are like 30hp as base; but at lvl 30 mc is only at 6,4k but victor is at 800 ish... that just ridicules.... no matter what system this is just ridiculous; also the clear numbers no percentage bs is going to make an army of Rats (you lvl up, or the dumbest animal that can lvl) extremely powerful as each rat will have approximately the same stats and HP as a human but you can fit literally half a million in a large house and each one get a magic attack from their base class of warlock of some bullshit like that -_-
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also shouldn't mc be counted as a "raid boss", WTF is he having issues in a 1v1 with a player? Have you ever heard of a mmorpg where the biggest baddest raidboss could remotely be solo'ed?... it's just so dumb..
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lastly the entire "god game" setup is ok, but when you start to throw in a-bombs, AK's etc. it just creates a really shitty magic world; honestly there is a reason no one wants to play a pnp rpg where there are guns in a full-on medieval world of magic, bc it is just kinda dumb, even just full on magic in our world would be rare bc guns and magic just doesn't mix; it looks dumb, it seems dumb, it feels dumb, and mechanically it just does not work at all
(trust me we tried created systems all become shit nonsense when you need to figure out how your magic shield can stop a military caliber bullet from a Spar but somehow can be threatened by the fire of a submachine gun... more, in short, the impact scale from a 9m gun to a 50.cal movable sniper rifle is so absurd that either magic is basically invulnerable to everything or it is basically pointless because a p90 will hit you with like 15 bullets a second nullifying and destroying your shield in no time, or no amount of special forces firing at you will hurt you and you need a 50.cal to deal but even here you will just use explosive or 50cal and kill the mage; it's not that hard and mages would in ANY system take extremely long to educated/created/train so it's a no go either way... and that's just one of the simplest problems in it; when going the other way of magic impacting weapons and tech it becomes a shtshow, also it is not fun for anyone to play in, seriously Mages dont want to play against/with stupid fcking storm trooper wannabe's; and special forces doesn't want to play with harry-potter loving mugglers pointing sticks and yelling dumb words....
it's just bad so DON'T! (also Nuke >>> everything or anything that survives is impossible to hurt, so creates shit world-building as well)

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in short, so much went wrong, the system is also becoming just "meeh" like a superhero side show kinda thing;
the entire humor and focus on dumb stuff has taken completely over by halfway through;
dragon mc uses his treasure to resurrect mc victor faster, minions proclaim victors gay love for mc, and mc talks with victor about it to bro-bond and communicates about his potential gay love for his dragon master -_-
and several chapters are used just to see the dragon try to hook up mc with girls like a teenage school drama -_- it's really crap at this point

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the idea is good, mc initiad personality is cool;

Revisado: 07-30-22

so the idea is really nice.
the mc kinda crazy personality is cool (although he never actually does anything wild and his morales seem weird considering he is reloading continually).

the mc kinda suck at using his ability for combat;
so he can stop time and move around for 10 minutes at expert speed etc... yet he is struggling SOOO HARD! in many fights where all you would do is freeze time and either throw or hit an object through a person's head while time is frozen (this would have the effect of an unlimited amount of force exploding the object hit when time resumes== instant death)..

the idea of who he is in others eyes doesn't match with how the world sees him;
he is doing PERFECT runs and has done so for 5 years irl; properly hundreds of years in his time and experience;
and yet it seems like he is neither popular, nor very known, nor very feared; which some of those should be very heavy but they ain't..
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the main issue though is that it gets kinda boring, at ch. 15 I have lost most interest because the main purpose is meeh, like why do we care about this girl so much; yeryer but the reason is siiigh.
the progression is very slow and not much cool happens, repeating the same stuff again and again gets boring really fast even if different routes if it doesn't have a good boost or really cool situation;
it seems like it is just becoming some detective story kinda thing which is Boring.... (his rampage was good).
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mc is soooooooo whiiiny.. seriously how is he still like a whiny teenager after 500-1000 years, shouldn't that be done after the first 20 years, you know like any other teenager :/ this on top of the already boring mc, doing boring things (because he handicaps himself so hard with dumb morales that doesnt matter when he reload; SUCH a wasted opportunity to have a really mad mc and still have his perfect run be "the good guy".... and how awesome wouldnt it have been to see badguys baffled as he just shoot through the head of the small kid to kill one of them while laughing at their choked faces; bc doesnt matter when reload- only last run matters...
.... but his sooo damn whiny, morale and pathetic on these area's i just cant tolerated it in the long run.
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I want to like it, I like the idea and concept; but the execution left me bored by ch.15, and by 30 or so i simply can't get through the amount of teenage existence crisis this 500-1000-year-old monster who has experienced massacres and slaughters of millions, but totally whine and sound like a teenager in crisis -_-

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A Real Dragon :D

Revisado: 07-28-22

I've been looking for a story with an mc who is an actual dragon in look, thought and behavior;
and this is as close as it gets;
it's funny how the teller is telling it from the dragon's view and a few time we hear how the world perceive their "rampage" :P
it's really well done.

some of the minion characters are quite annoying, and the voice for the wolf mage is emm "not optimal" :P
but it's still really good and I do like the effort that's gone into each character and the "boom" effect, although not Smaug lvl, is really nice as an effect of a dragon :D
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I would love to see the dragon learn those wizard/mage/sorceress skills, just it is clearly giving such extreme utility, defensive and offensive powers of spells; so not knowing it is a wasted (honestly with the setup as is he should make both undead but also tons of golems; everything is golems! ;)
… having teleportation and offensive instant hit spells would be really good for him and having natural regeneration is such a Must find ;)

but really good, very funny, Awesome! whenever the dragon mc is in the main view;
hoping the next will keep up the "dragon" feel ^^

there is some humor i could be without; which becomes WAY worse in the second; a few example:
1. power ranger and superhero "dumb humor" attitude of his kobolt; from the moment they started doing dancing as their attempt on fighting it annoyed me.
the kobold in general feels dumb and forced.
2. mc, the DRAGON, simping so much for his minions; this is a dragon, male, and a minion male; the dragon is kinda simping for him hard; he even gives up his horde (which is unacceptable for a dragon and very annoying; the way mc minion died to force him to do so was also absolute bullshit).
3. in the second books; we have entire chapters of nothing but MC's human being absolutely useless for romance, love or just sexual breeding and it is fcking annoying that the DRAGON! has so much personal interest it actually use time setting up dates like some weird highschool manga with her friends sneaking after her etc: it's REALLY fcking dumb....
yet mc's human is utter useless at breeding even though there are thousands that just want to breed (how it is even a choice and not his responsibility as the main minion is really dumb writing.)....
4. a power ranger kobold writes a Gay story about how the Dragon mc and his minions are having a secret gay love affair; he reads it for the dragon and the dragon Very seriously thinks about it and thinks about how to help his minion's misguided sexual urges (IT IS A DRAGON GODDAMMIT!!! ... seriously this was the VERY dumbest sht I've read; and trust me there is a lot of competition for that one as i read a LOT of web-novels as well)...
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so while this was pretty good;
I am not sure I can recommend it as a series; unless you like this type of "forced, childish, silly, weird?" humor; because the second book already a few hours in has used 1-2 chapters on only a girl's day (and she has the most annoying voice which gives you the feel of a handicapped Mongol) and 2 chapters on the dragon trying to get his minion dating going well..... it's just dumb... and honestly, it takes down the score from 5 to 3....
(the second book is so bad I have to drag this down 1 more star because the things I tried hard to ignore in this one just became massively worse in the second...
however, the dragon itself is done so damn well; there are multiple ways it reacts and that it is described that has stuck with me and views it has which have increased my own idea pool; as such it was worth it for me to listen to this, so +2 for that ^^)

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too little story too much focus on sex etc...

Revisado: 06-10-20

too little story too much focus on sex etc... its hard when you need to skip so much and the bad attitude of mc becomes too annoying for me

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mc is annoying

Revisado: 05-08-20

i find the idea off the clueless person being transferred which is soo good it is silly and yet react weird every time a situation comes up to drag down the entirety. it is simply not interesting. the person writting it also need a much better grasp of the systems his trying to copy into the book setup. it seems like its done by someone with only a vague grasp of the creature portrayed.. but mostly it is mc that turned me away.. narrator of females is good, male is very bad. mc dragon voice is terrible.

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