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Alex

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show don't tell

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-20-20

Reading this reminded me of the grade school instruction that you should show how your characters are developing instead of directly telling the audience. The book was full of characters saying "that had me think ... " and "I was thinking that ...." The story was clearly setup to sell future books. There isn't much conclusion and the big questions raised in the story aren't addressed.

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loved RJ

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-28-20

Narrator was excellent. Loved the characters. The author went on many tangents as they described the world of the Great American mall in the future where the support takes place. For example, discussions on the prevalence of mini golf inside the mall or the pun laden locations.

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