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huge plot hole that makes the whole story fall apart (from where I am)

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-19-24

ok, I'm liking the story but the issue is the new age language. now before anyone reads the reviews a few things.
1:I just started and haven't completed the book. this plot hole may get filled in later.
2: leave IRL politics out of this. I'm seeing it as is writing no sub writing.
3: this is an issue with me as I don't like major plot holes.
ok that being said here is the issue.



wally is trans, Carter stated. "if you say you are trans the universe accepts you whether other mages do not". I'm paraphrasing. the duel states that men are the only ones allow to fight. ok fair. Amanda said it her self that she can wipe the floor with her cousin. so the plot hole is why doesn't Amanda just say she's a man and fight her cousin to win.

that's major plot hole that cant be overlooked since it will kill the story of so fast.

all in all it's Good so far. if anything changes I will rewrite or delete the review

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breath of fresh air

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-12-22

this book is great, the MC is not OP. does not have a secret power. (more or less) does not have a god gift, was not born with greatness. he works his ass off to get just a bit more stronger. it shows. Im tired of all the "born with power" "blessed since birth" "a gift form god" MC. all the characters have depth to them. only a few were caricatures (like 2-3). I can't wait to hear more. for me I always love books that has this goal, "hard work always beats natural talent."

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ehhh no

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-14-21

if you enjoy "submissive" MC then sure this is your book. I only listen to a few chapters, so take my review with a grain of salt. the story had premise but the MC was acting too weak for my taste. he was just caught and already submitted. I understand his honor but still no plan or fight. yes he fought back when he was/did get branded. he also wanted to get punished. no just no. a little bit of femdom is fine for me but this was nope. again if you like submissive male MC, try this book but if you like your MCs' tough and a go getter,dodge this

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amazing and love the magic system

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-19-20

story was amazing, I loved that "texted book" was not going to be the next plot line. what I mean is that Alex was not going to be looking for it. I love the "spell breakers" a nice counter to sorcs. I can't wait to see what happens next, I'm going to buy the second book next week and I hope more audiobook are made in the future with Vic.

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