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Wordy

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-01-24

Loved the descriptions. But they didn’t really describe anything. Story line impossible for me to follow. Spectacular reader. Would listen to him even if the story were worthless. It really bothers me when an author doesn’t even get subjective and objective pronouns in the right place

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Emoting

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-20-24

If you enjoy hearing your mayor reading the Sunday comics you might enjoy Mr Bricks reading novels. I don’t. He has a good voice and would be successful if he would just read. Dripping emotion ruins the story.

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How about that grammar

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-14-24

These are three direct quotes:” nudge he and Ester”; between he and Decklin”, “it was him”. These are only 3 examples of literally a hundred similar ones in the book. I’ve heard/seen problems about when to use who and whom but can’t understand how someone could write a book not having the slightest idea of when to use she/her. He/him. I/me. The story is ok but to write a novel one should at least have a. It if knowledge about grammar. At least one should know he doesn’t know grammar and get an educated person to proofread the manuscript. Love the reader. I think he read sea books. Don’t know how he could read this with out correcting the grammar

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Cabinet maker

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-02-24

I was entertained by the story. Imagine looking a piece of furniture from across the room and liking its appearance but getting closer you see the edges don’t come together and the finish is rough. In this instance the cabinet maker is the author and language is the tool. I am so turned off when the author doesn’t know when to use subjective and objective pronouns. I’ve been an avid reader for 70 years and I find better English in a 1930 western than I did in this novel. Bring back the proof reader or take an English grammar class

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Forgetful

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-22-23

Rehash of the same story with a few different names with a bit more sexual allusion

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Opera

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-02-23

I’ve read reviews that call this series a space opera. I have to call it a soap opera. Stories go no real change in plot. New characters have different names but in reality have the same roles

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Aging author

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-11-23

I have been reading Sci-fi for 70 years. I’ve found when an author gets old and out of ideas he/she thinks of sex. This book is case in point

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Soap opera

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-09-23

Don’t know if the author really had any knowledge of where he was going, but as a reader I surely didn’t. I felt I could enter the story at any spot and not really need to know what went before or came after and not be any more confused than if I read the whole thing. If the author does another series I would recommend trying one with one main thread, make the characters lovable or hateful, have a defined beginning and end. Then start to be more creative as future works develop. I feel this first effort was very disjointed

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Disappointed

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-30-23

If I wanted a trashy sex novel I would buy one that made its contents clear. I was interested in something that had a little historical content. Disappointed in that. Mr hill has a pleasant voice and enunciates well. He drips with so much emoting he ruins everything he reads for me. I like Cussler, but content myself with reading only because of the narrator. I like WEB Griffin but am content with reading only for the same reason I tolerated the River God, quite liked the Seventh Scroll, but am very unlikely to read anything else by Mr. Smith.

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Verbose

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-02-23

Never say in a page what you can give a chapter to. In one of the vignettes in Doug Adam’s Hitchhiker’s Guide, a writer brags about getting an award for the most gratuitous use of the word “fuck”. I’m sure Stavely would give him a run for that award. If either of these two things would strike your fancy, you’ll enjoy this book more than I did.

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