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Two star story - very slow not overall picture

Revisado: 03-12-25

This is second book. And the story is sooo slow.

I gave two star for story as premise of dungeon control and build is not overplayed everywhere.

Amd yet, second book and Mc did a camp of travel people and shopping mall. That is story for 1 week irl and I feel in book it was even shorter.

Whwn I saw series of several books I was looking forward to it, but stopped. Sorry, I need faster pacing or it feels as getting through slog even at double the speed

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Author pisses me off

Revisado: 12-22-24

I don't know what the author is thinking but this is not possible he normally writes whole page into a space when somebody starts talking and then the story continues and within that one or two seconds that would normally take place he is able to write a whole page or a page and half of some internal dialogue and internal dialogue not just for one person but multiple persons before the story starts moving again this is so irritating and so stupid that I'm stopping reading this book

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Soooo many stats overview

Revisado: 07-28-24

I am just at 20 chapter. But I swear that it starts to feel like author uses stat overview as word counter to hit minimum word count for a book or something. Having it even twice in 1 chapter is just overkill, and having one after each level up without much change is overkill too!!!

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Worst narrator

Revisado: 04-13-24

Not that I do not understand narrator. But I as others tend to listen books ok faster speed. And this narrator is impossible to listen to for non native speakers. It feels like two words are one with his tone or sound or something....

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Good story, bad/irritating writing.

Revisado: 11-12-23

First review after close to 150 books on audible !!!

To me, the story seemed interesting.

But the author's way of writing is soooo irritating to me that I feel like he is doing it on purpose just to hit the 9 hour length and push book out.

Because the amount of repetition and the repetition on another words is staggering. I do not need to be reminded she refuses to be captured 100 hundred times via her inner mental dialog each time she sees someone following her!

And Perhaps if it was in one short sentence. But the author is exhausting the inner dialog each chance he has.

I have the author chance and I listened to all 3 books. He did not I improved. There is still to much inner dialog streaching for whole chapters even about main characters dilema IF IT IS OK TO LEAVE TO TRAIN TO ADJENT ROOM AND LEAVE HER SISTER OK ANOTHER ROOM. Like what the hell, 3/4 of chapter about this decision? To me this strikes me he is just about making the book hit 9 hours withing progressing the story much.

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First time I cannot snad Mc.

Revisado: 08-20-23

I cannot stand Mc. She has no motivation at all, she left earth where she had no goal, purpose. Amd now is in world with again no goal or purpose. Yes she has quests, but it feels like she is forced to do them. She doesn't strive become powerful, learn magic from her own will. The whole book I kept thinking, what a waste of God blessing on this one.

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Feelings after reading it.

Revisado: 09-28-20

Didn't read many books to compare, but I felt it was a book that drag the story on and on...

It was good, but felt slow and long. Hope that third book will explain secret behind the main character unique powers.

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Wish there was another one small to see their live

Revisado: 07-14-20

Amazing book and amazing series. True there was a little bit of dry area in middle of series but nothing bad. Loved it, though first book rly reminded me lord of the rings.

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