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Inconsistencies in development

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-04-22

The plot seemed to develop inconsistently. Some things that seemed significant weren’t given very much time. Character development felt inconsistent. Their behavior changed in ways that did not align with how the character was introduced. I noticed some grammar mistakes that weren’t glaring, but took away from the overall quality when they were noticed.

The author seemed to improve in these areas over time. Books published in subsequent years had fewer such development inconsistencies. The author is working to mature her craft.

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Lovely story

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-15-22

This was the end of a lovely trilogy. I enjoyed getting to know the characters and I liked that each book focused on a different sister.

The only critique that I have is regarding the performance. The use of the heavy southern accent wasn’t always aligned with the character. There were times when non-southern characters, like Harper, spoke with a heavy southern accent even though she grew up in Manhattan. Also there were times when a southern character lost the accent. The variation made it challenging at times to understand who was speaking in a particular dialog.

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