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Not sure what this was supposed to be...

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-19-21

The story is poorly written the characters need to be developed through their actions instead of through dictation of the narrator. Plot is full of multiple mcguffins and Mary Sue's, The store jumps around from place to place the place frequently but rarely bothers to establish itself in any place. Also not sure why this is a steampunk story story there seems to be more magic and mysticism than even mention of steam punk. overall I think it should have been re-read by author before publishing as I doubt their plot points came of as intended or logically sensible. I have a hard time believing proper due diligence was paid here.

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