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Story changed in a bad way

Revisado: 04-24-25

This book took a downwards turn for me after the promising first book. The character changed and the tone shifted majorly. I think this is my stopping point for this series.

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Good story with some issues

Revisado: 06-16-24

Overall I generally like the premise of the book. There are a few issues that logically don’t make sense in this world. The economy feels like it’s broken a bit and while generally it’s ok, Theres several times I question whether it would actually work. Another aspect is power levels. I struggle with the levels in this book as external characters never pick fights on lower level people? I get it maybe against the rules, but really? Im going to listen to the next books but those aspects leave this only a 3-4 star book for me.

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Meh

Revisado: 03-24-24

Decent story but ends on cliff hanger and no real progression . Nice to be back in the world but not great just good

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Decent series but lacking

Revisado: 03-11-24

I don’t like how this main character consistently kept adding women. There were no real challenges and no real drama that would’ve occurred. Every problem is pretty much solved by fing a new lady. The character doesn’t grow and theirs no much satisfaction in the ending .

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Soil is story with minor issues

Revisado: 02-26-24

Better than most books out there, few minor problems that could be fixed. Overall pace of the book is too slow it this should be fixed in the next series. Characters are well rounded but fall a bit flat. Works building is good not great.

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Subpar story with a wispy washy ending

Revisado: 02-22-24

This book is something of an enigma on a bad way. It has elements which are interesting but ultimately falls flat on the read through. Characters feel flat, motivations are very base and not expansive. No real promise or payoff for this book as far as I’m concerned . The books ends with read the next book always frustrating as well

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Audio voice box? It’s just wierd

Revisado: 02-17-24

Not my cup of tea and quite frankly story sucks. Too much skipping and too much npc lines. It’s just not natural progression or story.

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Ok

Revisado: 01-30-24

It’s ok, some of it is a bit lame , however the overall story is decent. Other books in this series are better.

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Solid story, good book for ya, few issues but overall good experience

Revisado: 01-28-24

This book was well done world building. The plot while predictable was enjoyable and enough. My only real criticism is that all the ideas and language where very basic. And that could be because it’s ya , but it was so basic .

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Mediocre middle book with plot trouble and YA level issues

Revisado: 01-22-24

I’m not the target audience of this book , but I gave this series a shot, overall this book has serval inconsistencies in the world, the plot and the story that are glossed over. ***Spoilers ahead ***
First this author has never been around or in the military and it shows. The amount of talking back or just pure ya fantasy on how this would operate ruins some of the lore.
Second, ancients and the first war is brought up in the story and it’s the first time recall hearing about others out their to help fight the enemy. This is poor plot development and should’ve been edited.
Third, the entire army thinks they are battling gryphons, but they apparently can’t fly as high as dragons, fly in heavy rain or and their riders have no advantage. This is poor plot as well. The dragons would’ve crushed them ages ago if this was the case. Why not give them something to make them formidable?
Fourth and final point. The double sigals and talents coming in this book was bad world building as this should have been foreshadowed in the first book. The bond to the 7th dragon type also was plot convenience and not overall an appealing solution to the ward problem.

The voice narration is also poor-low quality and I’d suggest improving it.

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