Megan Lewis Chavis

Somethings just didn't flow

Revisado: 11-22-24

It was hard at time for me to become fully engrossed in this book because some of the MC interactions felt off or didn't flow. As some other reviews mentioned, it just doesn't make sense how the MFC complains all the time how she is "trapped" and there against her will when SHE made the deal. The first few chapters go on about how tricky the fae are and how dangerous making a deal is....and yet she still chose to make the deal. Also the MFC constantly complains about how hot and cold the MMC is but she is constantly swinging back and forth between lusting after him and berating him for his actions. This is also strange to me because some of the things she gets upset about aren't even HIS actions. They are actions of others in HIS court and so she goes off because he is "letting" these things happen. It just doesn't flow for me. It feels like forced conflict or over exaggerated perceived injustices. I really liked the plot and the concept of the story, world building and lead- up to MC meeting could have been better.

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