Elizabeth Graver

Too Many Unrealistic Plot Holes

Revisado: 01-29-20

Like many Amish books, this was a bit too "teachy." Too much, here is what this word is in Pennsylvania Dutch, and here's how to say this...

But even though this book was left very unresolved, I can't force myself to listen to the next in the sequal because of too many unrealistic things in the plot. We're supposed to believe she can be treated in the hospital under a fake name with zero issues coming up? umm...ID? Medical Insurance? Forms?

Plus everything "English" is abustive men, dirty hotels, and drugs, while the worst thing to happen in an Amish town is a man neglecting to tell his father he bought a truck? You can show case the differences between the cultures without making everything so black and white.

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Unbelievable Character Cluelessness

Revisado: 05-25-19

Perhaps a middle schooler might like it, but I found it repetitive and predictable. One of those where it's not believable that the narrator doesn't "catch on" to what's going on. Even a young child would have predicted most of this so it's not believable that a highly intelligent 13 year old would be this lost. Plus we're supposed to think the police can't figure it out? Please.

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very poor quality

Revisado: 02-16-19

I could only make it through chapter 5. The recording quality is low and sounds like someone using a cassette recorder to record their own voice. The story doesn't grab your attention, at all, and the characters up til this point are very flat and unoriginal.

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wow!

Revisado: 01-28-19

Grabs your attention right away and keeps it to the end. At first, hearing Stephanie describe her difficulties made me feel so grateful for my own circumstances, but by the end I realized her daughter Mia is the one who should be grateful. Stephanie is such a strong role model and a great mom.

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Needs a new reader

Revisado: 07-30-18

I was not able to get very far into this book. The author and reader spoke too quickly and unclearly. She also spoke monotonously.

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I'm now a fan!!

Revisado: 10-22-16

I didn't know much about Chip and JoJo prior to reading this book. I'd caught the show a few times (while at the dentist, we don't have cable) and so I thought I'd check out the book.

I loved reading about their crazy wonderful life and adventures!

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