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William Schlott

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Good story but stop the snorting

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-26-21

Seriously the narrator needs to stop trying to snort. If it says a character snorts in the text leave it at that because it sounds like he doesn’t actually try to snort. It just makes it super annoying to hear. Otherwise the story was great lots of intrigue and character development

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Needs work

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-03-21

The story concept is interesting but starts falling flat quick. The narrator needs practice. Her delivery is choppy and she lacks distinct character voices.

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