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Lee Hartley

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wonderful.

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-13-25

it's a very nice take on the Core development story type. Our man gets a core through sheer luck and manages to turn it into a boon for himself and his community. The story covers his methods or lack thereof when it comes to overcoming a great number of commonly discussed or expected tropes with less than common methods. it has enough crunch to keep it interesting without the brain going numb from number salad.

I strongly recommend it.

Also, Neal Hellegers is fantastic.

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spot on narration.

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-19-24

Macronomicon cam always be counted on for building a busted character build that someday topples reality with insanely overpowered abilities. this story does not fail to deliver on that streak.
Perry is the oblivious main character who comes into a set of abilities courtesy of his parents disagreement over his proper path in life; causing him to get a strong mix of technology and magic based skills.
in short he awakens his broken abilities and grows into his power while creating a small team of driven and possibly/probably somewhat crazed girls.
the narration is superb, nailing the voices I had already been fostering my my own mind, aside from Solaris (other OP superhero) whom I had pictured a little differently but it still worked.

if you like macro's other novels like wake of the ravager, generic system... a few others I can't remember, or are just a fan of litrpg, and similar system based reads this is very much worthwhile.

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semi-unique

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-23-24

liked the story, the MC occasionally lacks depth or initiative and then makes up for it with a spurt of action. good progression and some fun scenes.

downside... I think the author needs an editor that can catch his lapses is tense whether past or present and maybe help with some of the math that isn't math.

upside: it was better than the first book in some of the structure, also we finally learn a little bit more about their brand of system and such.


I'll probably check volume three if it gets released just to see if there is an improvement, that and I like cats.

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meh. once again, once more,

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-13-24

ok... story started well enough even with a lack of early character development.

not far into the naration I'm hit with how many times the author uses the same word or word combination to excess.

Once more, instantly, and once again are some repeat offenders.

I like how our MC tends to keep moving but you never really get a feel for the time involved as the it never really reaches a consistent pace. I cannot say how well the end of book one was as I could not pass the halfway mark.

The narrator helped me get as far as I did but the author may wish to invest in a thesaurus and dictionary.

again the story has great potential and I really think the author needs to keep trying and maybe proof their texts and possibly run it through the editing phase a few times as it comes off closer to a first draft than a finished story.

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