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Satisfying series conclusion

Revisado: 06-23-24

Excellent completion of the series. Another book might have been squeezed out of the plot but it would have been less satisfying than this conclusion. Balancing Jake’s power level vs his challenges was well done, I did not feel he had plot armor. The characters were believable and actively part of the plot. This is in the top ten best LitRPG series I’ve enjoyed.

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fun story, good reader

Revisado: 03-25-24

Excellent sequel and reader. Pleased the plot quality remained solid and entertaining all through the book. Short term discomfort at the reader change but the effort to match previous style worked well.

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protagonist growing in power not in wisdom

Revisado: 03-19-24

Story is still entertaining. I am finding the protagonists low wisdom and lack of planning yet succeeding in quests increasingly stronger plot armor. He needs much higher luck to believably compensate for his bumbling solutions. The abundance of puns at inappropriate moments gives the feel of parody but not quite succeeding. The reader is adding much needed heart to the story.

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graphic porn not for me

Revisado: 10-03-23

Someone's sexual fantasy. The plot was an excuse to setup porn settings. I tried skipping over the porn scenes but ended up skipping most of the book. The reader was perfect for the content.

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Excessive telling instead of showing.

Revisado: 07-25-23

Too many words to describe actions. I found myself skipping 10 second intervals repeatedly. Often after skipping 30 seconds of narrative the action had not progress more than a few seconds. In total I must have skipped over 40% of the book in 10 second intervals. I had the same problem with book 1 but gambled book 2 would be better. The plot and characters have much potential but I feel mentally exhausted from slogging through all the exposition in both books 1 and 2. I'm curious where the story will go from here but not enough to continue the series.

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Well written entertainment

Revisado: 11-29-22

I've over indulged in LitRPG so I was not sure this would be a good choice for me. However the synopsis of this book offered to explore a refreshing perspective, so I took the gamble. I really enjoyed the story and glad to have made this purchase. The plot flowed smoothly and believably with no moments of cringe I often find in other LitRPG where some wacky reaction or situation advances the plot. The reader's voice was pleasant and skilled enough to immerse me into the story.

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Cringe level remains stable

Revisado: 04-08-22

My reviews have become as repetitive as the book. I am enjoying the supporting characters more than the main character. Unfortunately many characters seem to be echos of the main character. I still find myself skipping the massive amount of repetition which seems to be about half of the book. The cringe level has remained about the same as the first book and the reader is still carrying the story. The story arc is holding my interest and hope the completed series will be worth cost of my attention.

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Cringe level remains stable

Revisado: 04-08-22

My reviews have become as repetitive as the book. I am enjoying the supporting characters more than the main character. Unfortunately many characters seem to be echos of the main character. I still find myself skipping the massive amount of repetition which seems to be about half of the book. The cringe level has remained about the same as the first book and the reader is still carrying the story. The story arc is holding my interest and hope the completed series will be worth cost of my attention.

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Cringe level remains stable

Revisado: 04-08-22

My reviews have become as repetitive as the book. I am enjoying the supporting characters more than the main character. Unfortunately many characters seem to be echos of the main character. I still find myself skipping the massive amount of repetition which seems to be about half of the book. The cringe level has remained about the same as the first book and the reader is still carrying the story.

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Cringe level remains stable

Revisado: 04-08-22

I am enjoying the supporting characters more than the main character. Still skipping the massive amount of repetition which seems to be about half of the book. The cringe level is about the same as the first book but the reader is carrying the story.

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