W. O. Poetry

I found chapters mixed up and missing.

Revisado: 10-05-22

I was a bit confused halfway in when it seemed like a chapter was skipped, but now I'm frustrated that it completely replaced one in the finale and I now don't understand the end fully.

The story in it self is very entertaining.

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Old school Fantasy

Revisado: 05-10-22

This is an older fantasy novel and it's clear that it was written in a different time. Both in a good and bad way.

The describing of the heroine is almost worthy of r/menwritingwomen on reddit. At the same time the hero recognise misplaced anger, have a personal developmental journey and is, in a way, far more innocent than a modern person would be.

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Nice!

Revisado: 05-07-22

Excellent YA novel, with classical tropes with fresh angles and great world building!

I'm especially weak for specialised powers and this satisfied that itch.

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Entertaining

Revisado: 02-03-22

This isn't a master piece but it's really entertaining and a bit different. The whole series in one bundle is a good bonus since it should have been two longer books instead of four.

The premis with the main character being a schooled dungeon fairy and as such have more inside information does make sense, and gives the character some freedom that Dungeon Core novels have a hard time justifying.

A bit skeptic about a continuation but I'll probably bite.

Narrator does mess up sometimes with what is said in which characters voice and should work on female voices but does his job well.

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Got my Fred-fix!

Revisado: 09-04-21

The soothingly humble story of one of the gentlest characters in literary history is still ongoing.

Kirby Heybornes narration of Fred is excellent as always, providing the fundation with a soft and kind voice thru out the story.

Unusually fastpaced start, and intense towards the finale with a heart warming ending, but the pattern of short stories building the novel is still here.

Now we have to wait for the next installment in the House of Fred. :*(

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Narrator needs a hug.

Revisado: 04-21-21

I can't really grade the story, since I had to stop due to the narrators preformance. She sounds oddly frail, rushing sentences with a small vibration in her voice. It sounds as if she's trying to not have a panic attack and is almost crying.
As someone who's struggling with depression it's affecting me too much to continue listening, maybe in a couple of years I can give it another go.

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This is such a lazy disapointment.

Revisado: 04-19-21

Wow, what to critique first...

This is so lazily written that I couldn't get thru the second chapter. It's full of common mistakes, cheap outs and riddikulus excuses to just move on to what the author really want to write. The disinterest is contagious and left everything lacking. Even the choice to write from a first person perspektivet feels grounded in sloth.

I'm positive from the 5 star reviews that there are some highlights, but the author would benefit to do a rewrite. Less "cover my lily white ass" and instead some nice impactful introductions. Hopefully a propper reasoning from the Boss on how to explain the zombie (who still haven't figured out herself that she's one,) to the other cops that saw her dead.

This demonstrates one of the hardest lessons in literature: If you can't make something work, then remove it.

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A Real Plot!

Revisado: 04-19-21

A solid 4 in this genre. It's not the best book in the world, but it's the best LitRPG I've had on Audible. A solid and well versed narator that gives a nice gravitas and pace to the story. And to everyones chock and horror: a plot that doesn't rely on why the main character is transported to this realm! There's actual plot! To be honest just for that I'm going back and giving the story a 5 star. Still a 4 star overall, it's not going to win a Nobel prize.

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Just as enjoyable as the first one.

Revisado: 02-27-21

I really like Drew Hayes works and this one is written with heart! I try to not give things a 5-star raiting based on feelings in the moment thou, and this is not going to be nominated for a Nobel prize. Mostly because they'd never accept really entertaining literature.

It's heartwarming to hear of Sherman in his (somewhat) natural environment, and sometimes I get the feeling of Watson in the roll of a protective sibling, taking care of a brother as the parents were lost to soon. Not sure if that's what the author aimed for but I love it.

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Legend of Zelda inspired comedy

Revisado: 06-04-20

Determined and resoursful heroine, familiar world and a very human reaction to such a world. I liked it.

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