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Goob time

Revisado: 03-08-25

Its a fun story though, I honestly would have preferred him to be out of this Dungeon by the end. However I didn't find it getting repetitive or boring.

Just Jake doing Jake things which is what Im here for. plus the whole DoomFoot arc was funny af

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Too much fluff

Revisado: 01-15-25

The book is good but its the ipitomy of adding words to your work to make it longer.

I didn't think run on paragraphs where possible until now. Not even run on paragraphs run on Arcs is more like it. No lie I took a nap and woke up three hours later and missed nothing of consequence.

Anyways its a decent story, its just missing focus.

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Fun story but I have some gripes

Revisado: 01-10-25

So overall I think the story is fine but I felt this one was definitely a drop. My main complaint is that its pretty much just like a few hours of the MC Will playing billy badass without really much going on.

Its hard to put into words but at some point his antagonizing attitude to gods has gotten a tad annoying.

The assassination attempts, fine sure but like why even go to the summit. He obviously didn't need too, he didn't learn anything he didn't already know save a specific gods plot is running pretty thick but like. He would have learned that anyway by going into that specific dungeon if he just went with his elf friend.

Suppose I'm just a tad annoyed about the lack of interesting things happening.

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Love it.

Revisado: 11-08-24

I really enjoy this story so far. I know some people will have problems with a certain section honestly I think it was fine, but could have been a bit less deamening to certain religions.

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Great start but the last third of the book really lost me

Revisado: 09-28-24

So I really enjoyed the start, pretty fun though the prolonge was very strange and I kinda skimmed it until the real action started. I enjoyed everything all the way up tell they got to the city with the Giants. That arc went on for way longer than I liked. It was more fun for me when Felix and Pip where just out in the wild doing stuff. I really hope it goes back to that in the next book.

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Its a fun crime lord story

Revisado: 09-14-24

Really like this book, its fun. Though In the later half of the book I got a little tired of all the small side storys.

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Good Story with one or two personal gripes

Revisado: 07-05-24

The story is very fun, to me at least. My issues are really just with the two main characters names being so similar it makes it hard to follow sometimes, and the situation of their meet up and contract then the sudden fallout just felt a bit too sudden. I also question why they knew about the demon girl after a night and half a day.

Other than that, Great book.

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Good story

Revisado: 06-15-24

Its a interesting book. Though I did wish the MC wasn't so hesitant to use his powers. Which is fine, overall I enjoyed the book and hope I can read more soon.

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Good book, but a little boring at times

Revisado: 06-14-24

Overall I think the book was good and my only gripe was some of the battles just took wayyyy too long. At this point I'm kinda hoping we get to have some more adventures in the next book and less raids.

All the banter was really well done. The story flowed well other than the slow points for me personally in the raids.

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To many random characters with no bearing

Revisado: 05-24-24

I enjoyed the book, but honestly am pretty annoyed about all these random side stories. I think it was like four chapters of just characters who die more or less from there perspective.

I suppose it leaned into fleshing out the other great factions but I don't particularly enjoy how it was done through these random nobodies.

Still plan on continuing to read the next body but I won't lie this one was definitely the weakest. Not a ton really happens.

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