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AJinTX

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Author needed a better editor

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-25-23

Story mildly interesting with great opportunity but started many threads that were useless and not helpful to the narrative as they just trailed into anything without adding to the story. Massive time jumps that avoided what should have been the key resolution to the storyline. I would have asked for credit back if it wasn’t free

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