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narration and monologue problem

Revisado: 03-20-24

the series has a meandering problem with its monologue which are very forced and are inserted mid-paragraph in a way that broke immersion and flow.
the problem is further accentuated by the performance of the 2 narrator into creating a whining effect to the listener, thus make it very hard to kept yourself listen more than 10 minute. thus cost me more than a year to finish this volume.
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the series will much better narrated if the narrator would be a single person and performance be more monotone in nature(i.e. non-abridged)

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star "war" with an emphasis

Revisado: 09-05-23

its war, its logistic, its tactic and above all its what every space opera wrote afterward try to copy and fail

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A pain to listen to

Revisado: 01-31-23

The book is at best makes you think its writtten about primaris marine in adolescence trying to copy their forefathers in the worst aspect thinking its cool.
And at worst the story is colored in pure stupidity.

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A wholly satisfying listen

Revisado: 07-07-22

Went in without much expectations and found good food, finally. Moving on to book 2 i guess.

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An interesting noir hearing

Revisado: 07-02-22

Came back from book 2 to review and the performance of the narrator here felt much less whiny, probably due to the majority of the writing are exposition instead of dialogue and thus with allowed for much less expression to show through.
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Overall a good hearing session for a noir story in 40k setting, but listener would probably want to read book 2 instead of listen - and book 3 as well.

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Narration problem

Revisado: 07-02-22

The book writing is engaging for those who seek a noir detective experience in 40k setting.
The problem with narration however is that the narrator have a habit of over-expressed that reach into whining woman territory combined with slow reading speed that produce a very grindingly unbearable effect and makes a lot of the parts required speeding up.
Choosing a female narrator suit the POV but this style unfortunately gives the impression of the MC being an inexperienced-impulsive-childish teenager in young adult, not a trained operative worthy of inquisition rossete.
The narrator performance in spear of the emperor was much better so not the best hearing.

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