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Needed better Editing

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-16-24

Well first I am only half way through this book, but so far there have been 2 glaring mistakes. The first one I noticed is when Ren asks Ivy if she has a condom, she says no. Then she says she's on the pill and has been since she was Seventeen. A little later in the book, again Ren asks her for a condom and she says yes and gives it to him.
Later she's out and sees a Fae and says it's the first Fae seen since the Prince came through. No, they mentioned someone seeing one.
Anyway, enjoying it, but you need better Editing

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Woefully Lacking in ALL areas of Witchery

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-02-24

Violet is a horrible witch. She doesn't even try to learn. She thinks all these women are capable of murder.
I'm sorry this story is just so ridiculous.
They are worried about things being seen, just put a protection spell on it. Wipe people's memories. Like I said.... They are just juvenile.

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Not to Thrilled

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-16-23

I really don't care for Nora or maybe it's the narrator. She's to wishy washy. Kinda dumb.

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