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Good story but could have been fleshes out more.

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-24-15

I was confused in a few places with the stones and the friend Paul. With sequel it is important to me to have some back story included so you understand where these things fit in and what there purpose is. I did not find that in this story. Also it would have been nice to have more information abut the characters, what are the reasons they are in the situation they find themselves. The friendship between the mother and daughter and the old man? I felt it needed much more depth.

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