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Andrea M. Stermin

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Great Story!

Total
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-08-19

This story had me wanting the next chapter. I encourage others to read it. please

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Super Story

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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-04-18

This whole series kept me very enthralled. There are a few edits that might need to be considered. The story has a repetitive quality in so much as repeating qualities about the characters and their lives. An example would be rehashing everyone's powers during the final fight scene when we already know from their time at Lander, or intramurals. Doing this interrupts the emotions. I as a reader was experiencing a jarring feeling of being torn away from the story when inferences would have been fine.

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great series!

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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-08-18

looking forward to seeing what each character gets into next! the development makes you want to know.

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