Laralyn

Good story finally picking up

Revisado: 04-09-25

The story is getting interesting. Only thing that is bothersome is the Queen’s voice. Otherwise the rest of narration is well done.

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I DNF more than half-way through

Revisado: 09-05-24

I found the book slow and lost interest. I also didn’t care for the female narrator.

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Premise too big for so short a story

Revisado: 05-22-24

Some spoilers—I feel like this premise would’ve been better served in a longer, more in-depth novel. This felt like taking a full-length novel and making into a tv movie. I love this authors writing, but something is lost in this format. Why June? Why was she stuck there? Who was the lady who kept her there and what happened with her? A lot of plot holes.. The idea of time-travel and wormholes was kind of a shtick. The opening was so confusing I had to relisten to it. Not my favorite of hers. But narrators were very good.

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Eh….it dragged…

Revisado: 11-08-23

I love this series, and most of her other ones. But this book felt very very long and dragged too much. To the point where the climatic scenes were anti-climatic to me. And the ending was very unfulfilling. I was really hoping for more out of this part of the series but by the time the end part came the buildup just hadn’t been there for me. I felt like the book could’ve been condensed to half its size at least. Too much repetitive introspection. Overall, this story just seemed like a filler book to tell what happens in the last ten chapters which was already expected.

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Parts were thin and frustrating

Revisado: 07-12-23

Without giving away spoilers there were many times in the story that I felt were contrived. Where a character could’ve said a few words and things would’ve been solved easily. Also if Silas was so well known and popular why was he able to walk around a dorm unseen and unreported? The ending was unsatisfying also. Those who caused all the conflict were never dealt with—just a swift apology and more sex. (I’m not against all the sex but let’s not use it as filler).

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I think this one is my favorite ❤️

Revisado: 07-09-23

I enjoyed this thoroughly and think Ali has wonderful mastery of the slow burn. The narration matches as well including the quirky moments and humorous punches.

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Boring

Revisado: 05-28-23

The story didn’t hold my attention. The characters were a bit flat and the ending was weak.

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Starts off sooo slow

Revisado: 05-22-23

The secondary characters are ridiculously unbelievable and I almost DNFd it. I can’t stand when the heroine is made to look spineless as a way to be “nice”. No. Take that angle out and I would’ve enjoyed it more. Except it was sooo slow until mid point.

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I DNF

Revisado: 05-06-23

I couldn’t stick with it. I tried. Hades seemed like a captivating character but there were too many characters being introduced up front for me to get an idea of what was happening and for the story to really get moving. I wasn’t invested in knowing what was going to happen. Nothing kept me wanting to continue. And I agree the narration seems AI.

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Cute concept—but

Revisado: 04-25-23

I think parts were a bit overblown and it was dragged out a bit too long. Plus I found Emma to be extremely grating, self-centered, oblivious, and not worthy of so many people going out of their way to make things so perfect at their expense.

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