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Christopher Benedict

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Interesting premise, execution lacking

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-05-25

The story was very interesting and unique. It differed enough from normal litrpg and progression fantasy I thought I could get past the narration and wonky dialogue in the beginning. However as the story started off strong, it started to get repetitive quick. Characters disregarded the MCs antics as “something Atlas would do,” or “Atlas was always a strange one,” while not actually questioning it. I understand that an author cannot drag their feet on convincing other characters of the impending threat, but the characters just being ok with everything obliterates any suspension of disbelief.

Atlas having the right answer at nearly every turn makes it unbearable to continue to read. I was bored and skipped three chapters and felt like the story didn’t really move forward and skipped another three.

The narration is lacking and I initially thought I was listening to an AI narrator. The production quality of the audiobook is so bad that I was surprised during dialogue, paragraphs, and chapters. There are few breaks between these sequences that it’s jarring. Characters are portrayed fine and they had a decent amount of uniqueness but overall lacking.

I wanted to like this, it started off strong then it fell off hard. If the story, dialogue, and the MCs ability to pull answers out of thin air, gets better I would pick it back up. As of right now, it’s a dropped series for me.

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Weird NPC Relationship

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-27-24

Spoilers. The story has an interesting premise, but there are too many weird situations. The MC’s changes are too quick and ring hollow, he goes from wanting to be able to log out to accepting the situation as his new life too quickly. The progression on decisions he makes is random, for example falling in love with an npc. It isnt written well either. Jeff Hays did the best he could be sometimes he lacks the emotion required to elevate the source material. Average.

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