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great narration, weak story

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-20-15

Great narration and impressive voice changes for each individual character. Audible breaths during non-dialogue portions were slightly distracting. Disjointed writing and mediocre story sounds more like a school project than a polished piece ready to publish.

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