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The author rushed so much they forgot to tell a story that is not predictable.

Revisado: 04-29-25

Yeah, all the time in the world. Few chapters later you’re too late just by a few minutes. Oh, did you like the fact that the main character was sent away. Again. Seriously this story this whole story story would have been solved if the main character did not have rush from here to there or there or there. It wouldn’t have been so bad it has happened in every book.

I’m pretty sure we spent more time with the slime girl randomly got “pregnant?”than we did with the Mother.

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Some plot holes but a good book in the series.

Revisado: 03-04-25

Persua is still a murder in a world where truth spells exist some villains drag down the story instead of enhancing it. Remember the what happened in the first book. But I would have to say the only other downside is too many POV’s besides that I like the book.

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Books is fine.

Revisado: 02-19-25

My biggest issue with this is the reader needs to drink some water and stop making the swallowing noise towards the end of the book.

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WTF MC just rolled over.

Revisado: 01-17-25

Just roll right over. Dose whatever the big bad said with zero in put on a “bargain” didn’t even bother to turn whatever the hell she’s sign. Zero thought process. When did she get so wishy washy?

I love this series but if this is the main characters baseline of” that is gonna happen to me so I take it without fighting I think this might be where I stop. I will try the next book.

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???? This story is meandering around.

Revisado: 01-09-25

It’s like you take a wrong turn in to a residential area on the road and don’t know how to get back on track. Needed to have a bit more focus. Too many ideas and a bit lackluster of execution. Like why dose the MC start doing random things. (Trying not too spoile). But all she needed to do was to keep her head down and her ADHD say F that noise let’s go tell people what I am and join stuff that I have no business joining and in fact well likely be the worse and stupidest thing I can do. This book just make me this MC is an idiot.

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Feels rushed and not thought through.

Revisado: 01-01-25

You should have just kept the powers with the same people. Her girlfriend did not need to take her brother place as the one to see the future just to keep him in a spot where the other characters can keep putting him down and not take him serious. It make look bad like the author wanted to hit the delete button. And when I get in to a book the last thing I want is to be thinking about why the author is doing something. It brings me out of the story. The character should play the hands they are dealt if you want to keep deadlines relevant stop backpedaling.

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I like this book but.

Revisado: 12-21-24

The only reason why I can’t rate it higher is because the both the MCs names are so close together it is so easy to lose who is who AND THIS IS THE THIRD BOOK THIS SHOULD NOT BE A PROBLEM. But it is.

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This was a weak entry in the series.

Revisado: 12-10-24

The MC is getting scatter brained and the side quests are getting longer and boring. Do we care about a cursed incubus that has to suck up 3/4 of this book who was just introduced? That sends the MC on a quest that holds no plot to anything else in the series? This was a skip-able book.

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Bully porn.

Revisado: 11-17-24

Bad mouthing female Harry Potter knock off with bullying that’s the extent of the story.

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Rushed make it poor

Revisado: 09-29-24

It could be good maybe even great but it was rushed. And books that go to fast make for crappy stories. The world is barely made. No time for you to get attached to any characters. Be for they are traded out for new ones. The magic system is nothing to write home about. It magic they use it.

The MC spends more time traveling from place to place than actually doing anything of use in the place to the point where you have no freaking clue why he even went there besides author told me to.

This book is a good rough draft and it could’ve been something great, but it feels very rushed.

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