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Frustrating

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-09-24

I kept waiting for the story to draw me in deeper, to be more intriguing than it was. Instead I felt frustrated and annoyed as the story progressed.

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DNF’d - is this Crave fanfiction?

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-05-24

I’ll preface this by saying I DNF’d this book. I got the audiobook because, as an adult who commutes everyday for an hour, this is the best option for me.

What I can only describe as the first page made me immediately hard pause. The male narrator (who by the way, hasn’t made another appearance since this opening that I listened to) was describing a place and said “admin people.” I am aware that there are thousands of ways to describe someone who works in an administrative role. And sure, even kids might be more relaxed in their word choice. But the NARRATOR called them “admin people.” Not the administrative team. The administrators. The head office workers. No. The “admin people.”

It took me most of the commute first hearing that before I could allow myself to continue the story.

As the story continued, I had to pause again. There was something familiar about this story. And not in the comfy, cozy, familiarity of tropes and stories. This was a “these exact words have come across my brain in almost the exact same order. What the hell?” So I had to pause again and think, trying to piece why these words were familiar. Then it hit me: another book I DNF’d: Crave, by Tracey Wolff, because the prose was too young, too immature for me to enjoy.

But I thought, once again, if I can just power through this moment, this scene that literally put into mind another book DNF’d, perhaps there will be something redeeming about it that will allow me to enjoy.

And then we completely skip into being told things that happened without being shown a single thing. Corvina (great character name, sorry you’re stuck with a horrible story) in her own narrative fashion tells us the reader what other characters told her. As if they were already super established characters and we are skirting around unnecessary details. But those details were anything but unnecessary. Yet the narrator skips over them so the audience can be rushed to the plot.

Do I know anything about any of these characters? Not really. Do I even care? Not really.

And it’s so hard to say that because, I wanted to give this story the benefit of the doubt. I heard the controversies around the cover being possibly AI generated. I just didn’t think the story itself would also potentially be AI generated. Or maybe it’s just fanfiction. Because that’s the only reasonable explanation that would tell me why this story was literally the same as reading Crave.

The male narrator I didn’t hear enough to really get a good sense. I felt like he was trying too hard to sound brooding and mysterious and sexy but completely missed all the points that would actually translate in his tone.

The female narrator made me feel like I was in a rollercoaster and I wasn’t sure how she was going to perform each sentence. Sometimes quiet but not because the scene was meant to be quiet. Sometimes almost like she was questioning just what the hell she was reading.

I’ve plugged through stories because the narration was well done but in this case…I just felt icky the entire time and ended up refunding after chapter 4…or 5. Honestly I couldn’t tell because the chapters are not accurately reflected.

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Casual Enjoyment

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-27-24

Jane Lindskold has easily been one of my favorite authors for years. With her ability to craft diverse stories and universes, she’s always been an instant buy. The start of this new series is casual and enjoyable—feeling at once like a story you can read to your children as well as enjoy as an adult. Having diverse and distinct characters and voices, readers can easily begin to feel connected to one or more of the ragtag group.

The narrator did a phenomenal job bringing these characters to life with unique voices and quirks. Like I was when I finished the physical copy, I was sad to see the end, and am instantly jumping into the next book to continue with the adventures of the entire crew.

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Repetition of phrases/word choices

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-29-23

I enjoyed the first book immensely as an audiobook. This one lives up narration wise, but story-wise I was rather disappointed. Beware, spoilers below:

I could’ve believed that Shane was unable to destroy the other typewriter. I could believe he had been secretly collecting the letters all along. I found it hard to believe he happened to search loose floorboards and stashes of letters.

It was little things like this throughout the story that frustrated me. What was the purpose of giving Roman the wrong typewriter? I feel like I missed something there.

Enva felt incredibly hands off and just mentioned, and even when she was present, she wasn’t. Not really. She felt almost pointless. A pointless god, existing merely to antagonize another god.

There is so much telling rather than showing in the author’s writing style. I was able to ignore it with the first book but given this was to wrap up the series I was surprised.

There was no acknowledgement that Val died, barely by Iris and certainly not by Dacre. Was he even aware his associate died? Why didn’t he question when the man never appeared with iris in tow? Again, did I just miss it, or was it never there?

Overall, it’s a decent story, but not worth the two books. I feel like more could have been fleshed out with the narrative across the board.

Repetition of certain phrases and words (this book it was evanescence, previously and here again, it was “startled”. I’ve seen started and startled in other books but here it was always startled, and never felt quite right when it was being used.

In a way I feel like I was cheated out of a story. Like I wasn’t being told a story about the story, rather than reading/hearing it first hand. It’s such a frustrating feeling to get as a reader. I want to experience the story with the characters. I don’t want to be told they experienced these things and then move on. I want to pause and feel just as traumatized as the characters are supposed to feel, to be left thinking about things long after I’m done reading.

And while this review may sound like I didn’t enjoy myself, I did. I finished it, which is more than can be said for other stories lately. I just feel like there could’ve been so much more than what was shown and I hope as Rebecca continues to write, she begins to dive more into showing, rather than telling the stories she has.

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Whose story is this?

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-07-23

I’m not sure whose story this is meant to be. Book 1, first person. Book 2, partial first person, more often third person. I still firmly believe this author has no understanding about secrets or an awareness of the surroundings of her characters. While book 1 was talking treason in the streets, book 2 was talking secrets aloud, surrounded by strangers, constantly. How has no peripheral character heard these characters’ plots? They do it so openly…

I wasn’t impressed by some of the blatant telling of what was happening. I would’ve rather been shown through the narrative than be told that “everything went according to plan”.

This story became every story but our MC’s story. And the more I heard Elspeth’s name, the more it annoyed me.

I wanted to like the magic of this story, but felt it was a bit complicated with the tapping of the cards. What constitutes tapping? If you hit 3 fingers at the same time, is that once or thrice? Why does personally canceling take 3 taps, and someone else canceling only take 1?

And listening to what I thought was Hoth’s death, I was very confused when he came back to life. I thought his lifeless stare meant he was dead. Guess that was just poor word choice.

I was less impressed with the narrator this time. Some character voices were so similar, I had to go back to ensure I knew who was speaking.

Overall I felt this series could’ve been one book. It felt unnecessarily long, covering excruciating detail on things that really didn’t seem to matter (the parents in the dungeon, etc). Not sure I’ll be rushing for a physical copy any time soon. Maybe time will make me more forgiving.

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Treason Outspoken

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-04-23

When I first started listening, the narration threw me off. But then I felt a click with the story and was actually able to enjoy the narration. There were moments in the prose that the narrator was whiny and annoying, but I credit the audio narrator for making it bearable.

My biggest concerns were every character openly talking about treason, things they were hiding, etc. all out in the open. You’re telling me that every single instance you just blurted all that out, no one happened to overhear? Not even once? For people keeping secrets, they certainly can’t stop talking about theirs….

The overall story though had me enthralled and I was actually very anxious as we neared the end because…well, it felt a little unlike the rest of the story. It was a bit more forced and almost like the author was trying to extend the conclusion rather than just keeping everything into a single book. Unless there are some outstanding things that happen in Book 2, I worry that this was extended and adjusted only to sell additional books, rather than just completing the story.

However I found myself enjoying the story enough to order book 2 even before finishing. Now finished, I will allow myself to reflect on book 1 before I dive into wherever the story goes next.

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Clear and distinctive voices

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-02-23

I love this story always. I was hesitant about the narrator—not among my favorites to watch on the screen. However she did a phenomenal job with this and other audiobooks that makes her an instant listen for stories.

I listen to this audiobook over and over when I want to hear the full story and I enjoy it every time. Each character has a distinct voice and even without dialogue tags, you know precisely who is speaking.

The story is a classic and one I will always read/watch/listen to over and over again.

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Quirky, but interesting choices

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-16-23

I received this audiobook for free. I had no idea what to expect going into the story.

There were some unusual quirks on the narration where echos were used to simulate thoughts. At first it through me off because I didn’t catch that’s what it was. Once I realized, I actually rather enjoyed it.

The story itself, while a fairly standard hero journey of sorts, manages to get me to think about it even when I wasn’t listening to the story. I’ve only ever read one other queer based book, so wasn’t sure what I would get going into this story. But I was pleasantly surprised by the journey the characters made and enjoyed following their story to the end.

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Unimpressed

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-11-23

I honestly had high expectations from this story. Instead I was left disappointed. I heard dragons, and romance, and exciting battles, and politics I thought I would be pleasantly surprised. But instead I was left with several characters I felt I barely knew, the death of one character that…didn’t really seem to matter at all. Or affect me in any way. More of a “sucks for (them)” but otherwise it didn’t affect the story in any way. And I didn’t care. Which is really sad.

I never felt like any of the characters were in danger of failing. Or dying. At any point. During our dragon rider’s final combat performance, I never felt like she almost lost or was in any danger of losing to her stronger, more prepared/more heavily endowed with money counterparts. I never felt like she was at risk of losing anything. Even when she did I didn’t feel like it would last (spoiler, it doesn’t).

I felt the romance of two characters come long before they did. And it felt awkward. Pandering, rather than natural, which is disappointing. I would’ve liked to have felt their passions.

Which leads me to my ultimate disappointment: this story was about 85% telling rather than showing. Time jumped so often and between so many characters that it would’ve been better if each of these characters had their own story, and then they were weaved together later. Instead, I’m being told all of these histories and experiences the characters had over the course of several months. I don’t get to enjoy experiencing it with them. And it was so disappointing.

I wanted to enjoy this book. Truly. But I’m grateful I got the audiobook because if I’d read this, I probably would’ve never finished it.

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Ignore the red flags, everything is fine

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-29-23

What I’ve felt this entire books was that our MC, Lily, just continues to ignore red flag after red flag because …well it’s not always explained. She just does. And as a reader I’m supposed to accept it. But I don’t.

Trigger warnings should’ve been given. There is physical abuse. There’s emotional manipulation. I honestly just wanted to finish it to say it’s done and not think about it anymore. The truth is I didn’t enjoy the story, did not connect with the MC and cringed over and over with her relationship.

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