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Another great T Kingfisher story

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-09-24

An intriguing blend of cozy mystery with high stakes magic horror, coming together into a unique story progression with great pacing and intensely emotional reveals. Definitely one of her best stories.

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Got better by the end

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-07-24

for some reason, the story started a bit off but it got much better by the end, when the Chekhov guns were fired

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Brilliant Lovecraftian sci-fi

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-30-24

The Lovecraftian atmosphere and the ton of cool reveals make this novel an amazing read. It's tightly plotted and greatly paced. Ray Porter is as usual at the top of his game as well. If it's weren't for the several cliched character moments and challenged morality that makes some "heroes" terribly unsympathetic, it would be a clean 5 star. But those moments don't take up that much page space so you should absolutely read this. Especially if you like the sample, this is for you.

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Poorly written

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1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-29-24

Normally I'd give a book I managed to finish 2* just for that but this one has it all: excessive narrative summary, lack of tension, boredom, uninteresting unlikable characters, and the worst of all is the Way the POV is written. What it lacks in actual character thoughts and motivations for actions, it overcompensates with laundry lists of descriptions of what happens to be around. It's not even POV but the author's stream of consciousness.

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Loved it

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-25-24

Phenomenal worldbuilding and plotting, with tight twists and turns. The world and characters are a ton of fun.

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Unintelligible accents

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-07-24

The story is okay, despite Sanderson falling back on his preferred cliche for representing women, but the accents Kramer went for are terrible. Together with the strange Ye Olde English words, they make parts of the story unintelligible.

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Endless internal monologue

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1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-20-23

Jesus Christ this book starts out well enough but only 3 things actually happen by the end, and you're just showered with endless internal monologue of the protagonist THAT KEEPS REPEATING THE SAME 3 THINGS. That the monsters are coming after her, that she needs to protect her life, and that she absolutely must go against her own best interest because it's ESSENTIAL for her to be rude to the enclave kids.

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trope: Romantic Plot Tumor

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1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-25-23


Romantic Plot Tumor is when the romantic subplot takes over the entire (usually adventure) novel and utterly destroys it. This wouldn't be a problem if the tumor in this book wasn't festering with malignant boredom generated by tedious dialogue and a relationship based on physical attraction. IRL physical attraction is lots of fun but on the page is just as interesting as a blow by blow fight or Insert Tab A into Slot B. I don't want these people to be together, i barely care about the worldbuilding which was slightly promising but ultimately insufficient and unimaginative. The actual plot starts and ends at the beginning of the book and never returns for the rest of 90%. I said it before, breaking the writer's promise is immoral. If you market it as a fantasy book, write a fantasy book. If it's an unclever, unfunny, uninteresting romance where you don't root for the romance but there's an insanely long and detailed sex scene, market it as soft prn or new adult as it's euphemistically called. 

To add insult to injury, Bujold subscribes to the rape culture that normalizes it. There's a rape attempt at the beginning of the book because of course it is because IT'S NORMAL. There is absolutely no need for the rape exist since the woman is kidnapped to be killed by the malus creature and that's THE FANTASY stake, so why do we need a non fantasy, disgusting one. But rape is just one of those things that happens to women, like periods, forced pregnancy, domestic violence, and bad hair days. What's a little forced sex to you when someone else enjoys it? No biggie. When the attempt rapist gets killed, the woman is actually sad for him, which is insane given the amount of trauma rape causes IRL. Oh no, poor rapist, said every rape victim, right after being given PTSD by the rapist, who was ENJOYING themselves. Seriously, Bujold is sick. She has that entitled mentality that it can't happen to her because she's too rich and well bred, and the victims of rape should be more sympathetic to the plight of their aggressors. It's no biggie after all. Your genitals are for everyone to abuse. Bujold has similar entitled attitudes throughout other books, reflected in the classist, superior outlook of Miles Vorkosigan who is fren-frens with the emperor and calls him on his first name, and in the self satisfied attitude of the doctor in the other series, who walks without fear in the middle of a magic ebola outbreak because he's protected by his "demon", read edgy angel because it's indistinguishable. It's the complacent, cozy attitude of the person who can come by no harm because their money and social status cushion them too well. In the mean time, rape victims should be more accepting. Spare me, Bujold.




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Best book on writing

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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-10-23

This is the absolute best I read on crafting fiction. Although the opening alarmed me a little by starting with a bad, oversimplified example and with details about the author's life that made me think it might be one of those self congratulatory "wisdom" books, it quickly went on to treat some of the hardest problems I've had when trying to develop a character/plot. The main of those problems is how to make an antihero that's satisfying to read and not a reader hate fest. Bird deconstructs this into its parts and then reduces reader identification to 3 pillars that he then treats with examples. To my surprise, his next book, the one dedicated to character, is nowhere nearly as insightful as the section in this book. The following sections of Secrets of Story are possibly less revelatory but only because the character parts are so enlightening. Excellent book for those who already write but ran into problems they didn't know how to solve. Is generally unappreciated by people who don't write because they never ran into these problems.

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Mixed bag

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-10-23

The worldbuilding is phenomenal but I say this as someone familiar with words like Hamiltonian, NP completeness, and lattice, and even I had to jog my memory on the Church Turing hypothesis. Which isn't a bad reason to pause the book for, but could've been integrated in the writing as an explanation to someone. however my point is that the way the author uses the math to give a hard sci-fi basis to Lovecraftian abominations does indeed make the target audience feel mind boggled, and I loved it. However the plot is kind of meh, and the author has no skill or understanding in signposting the plot or giving enough information at critical moments, which can make one feel lost and having to rewind once or thrice to the description of the little round yellow things with the bumpy surface, whatever they were?! Because of the lack of plot signposting, the book also feels disjointed and episodic. Characters are intensely meh to outright annoying. I actually actively wished for the main character to not have a chance at a relationship with a woman because he wasn't good enough for her, and I was in *his* POV at the time. So bad POV work as well. I am a plot/mystery reader and this was interesting enough to keep me going. The series massively improves after the second book and I very likely finish it.

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