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John Posey

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Love the VA

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-19-22

Love the VA do all of us a favor and ask her to do Rig Runner. That one of my favorites book from Sneak Guy

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😑😶🙄

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-19-21

In this volume Steven goes after the last remaining dragon nights And these are the knights that have seen and witness 1st hand the power And brutality of the shadow and Talon And what does Steven do he kills them off Most people would say he's justified or he didn't have a choice because they were trying to kill him I see it from this point of view You're about to raise hell and going to battle would I enemy that you only hear stories about never seen and only read about These knights battle them before Wouldn't make sense to save or try not to kill them so when you do Go into battle You have some knowledge on what you're facing Maybe get a back story Not for just Steven but for the reader is well But heck even Steven knew how over powered he was and he probably knew he wasn't gonna get killed at the end of the story anyway so he probably didn't care.Like many when I 1st read this I was like all damn you know I fell good for Steven but when I came back and read it over and over then I realize I'm like wait a minute you could have use them many opportunities missed so far in this series me the entire series is this in a nutshell I'm not hating on a just a for the sake of being a hater I'm hating honest is because so much potential Could have gone into the story making it even better Look I know this is a Harem series and I know for most of us we're here for the sex but that does not excuse the fact that you can't have a good plot a good story here A good world building opportunity you got it here But if you're interest just are sit there and you know make us horny hey good job👍

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Would you ally yourself with killer?

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-19-21

In this volume Steven is trying to build his army So he can fight shadow An talon The only problem is that he's been in such a killing spree that the other Dragon lord Or suspicious or cassia's around him trying to kill him and to be honest can you blame them No it's said over and over revolution revolution and yet it's not really But anyway that's what's going on mostly in the story At this point Of the volumes and the stories I would probably be a little bit more harsher just because I'm not seeing any improvement in the writing style or the characters are anything like that As far is growth Action is always there sex pretty much the same sure a couple of new girls but it's pretty much the same so the author here is just falling on the formula that works only to add what movies did back Andy early 2,000s when it came to sequels find what the audience like and add more This is what's gonna pretty much happen Throughout the the volumes and finding ridiculous ways of trying to keep Steven from being too overpowered for example He needs to get to Australia and instead of flying over there It's said that is impossible because he'll get to tired I flying 30' foot dragon can't fly from the California coast to Australia unless magic ritual forces him to fled now suddenly he can fly to Australia And yet he needs a jet To fly.I don't know about you but if I am a dragon I'm flying anywhere I want if I get tired I've just simply say hey I'm 30 foot dragon Then we go to sleep in the mountains of swim.

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The great destroyer

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-19-21

In this volume Steven the great destroyer He's insisting on carrying on his father's work My biggest problem with this volume is the fact in a matter of Stevens personality and why I called a question on it where I think it's not real it's not logic Your family was murdered You decide to get revenge and you get it then you turn around and start murdering everybody else so that way they can go through the same thing that you went through all for the sake of caring on your father's work And yet he is supposed to be some great hero or great leader into the next revolution In the author has to go to great lengths to keep saying over and over I'm just a simple guy he I'm just a simple hard worker it's funny what you're saying and your actions they're not
alike they're telling me 2 different things As a reader I'm trying to get behind the main character I'm trying to see if through his eyes and if it's difficult or I'm questioning his Motives I'm not really gonna have a good experience As the reader reading this adventure if that makes Once again I ask who is Steven And also please do not tell me Who he is show me their his actions show me through his words and make sure that they are the same For example He can't be a killer 1 second and then the very next second starting to give a damn about life after butchering a whole entire clan as a reader you're gonna be asking yourself what?

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The last real threat

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-19-21

Book 3 will be the last real threat to Steven's life in this series and there's 10 books So what I'm talking about is a serious threat a serious tension that you don't know if he will make it or not And with that being said it's not even a real threat if you know what I mean because he's so overpowered As far as the enemies are concern in this book I always wonder where they truly evil Because for the sake of being evil and Steven needed characters to fight Cassius Was he truly evil What because he spoiler murdered someone's family in order to take power Does that really make him evil It is it was explain That dragon soul Customs Is a very brutal world to live in Conquest Is made by killing The prime and his escort but does that make him evil Now according to Steven That does make someone evil since he's clan and mother we're murdered Yes he does the same thing Yet and his case It's for revenge because his father decided to endanger the world by dealing with forbidding magic In a couple of dragons did not want that to happen to their world by bringing danger But yet they're evil?

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New review

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-19-21

I decide to go back and give review in hope to help the author improve. For story it is entertaining but going back and listening I can see the plot hole and I found myself questioning out loud Steven thoughts motives and white knight Trope It was like watching someone who has multiple Personality And throughout the story I just found myself asking who are you Pick whoever you are and stick with it I think I would enjoy the main character more if he had a flaw Instead of trying to be This overpowered Gary Stu.Yes he know how to fly yes he did not know how to breathe fire but that's easy because he was thought to be a human That's not a flaw he just didn't have anybody to train him but once he had somebody to show him did he have any these problems no So that told me right there that's not the type of flaw that I'm talking about When you have a flaw in your character you kinda hope get you can overcome it however when you give are character no flaws and he's just stupidly overpowered The character is boring Not the 1st read After the second 3rd and 4th yeah it's tiresome So be aware of that While going forward

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Mc

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-19-21

I guess the story is okay I'm just wondering was it necessary for the MC to be portrait as viking? Could be not be a villager that happen to stumble on to eggs. It just feel the name viking was use to draw the reader in because the writer felt there wasn't enough pull there. heck even the narrator felt the need to butch up MC voice because the word viking was used. I'm sorry the main character is not a viking I never felt not believed he was viking just some water down white knight character that said please and thank you. This made be weird request but can we have a flawed character that we the reader can related to and not some Gary Stu have some fun don't do the rinse and repeat mechanics that in every harem series (looking at you Eric val!)


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Went to sleep on this

Total
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-18-19

Thank God this was a credit purchase and not money. if there a follow-up do not repeat

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