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A better African Samurai

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-28-24

This book reminded me a lot of The Black Samurai, but has a lot more historical documentation, and I think it's more accurate to history. I do wonder about how much of the "racism" was actual hate, rather than political pragmatism or a personal grudge.

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Rushed and nonsensical (Spoilers)

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-18-22

The performer did a good job with the material, but the story was a mess. As far as minor criticisms go, I hoped for more continuity between the first book and subsequent books (e.g., Finch returning, or at least his organization; the details of Donny's fate), but the biggest failing for this book was its story; I was constantly getting Dr. Evil vibes from The Superintendent. He wants to blow up the moon, because he claims that's from where Custodians get their powers? Really? Is he suicidal? Is he insane? Otherwise, he cannot be so stupid as to think that he could rule a world with no living humans in it, which is what would actually happen if there were no moon. Insane villains are so boring and cliche; there is no weight to their actions, and insanity can justify any plot contrivance/convenience/contradiction. I kept expecting some kind of 4D twist, where The Superintendent was revealed to not be a complete bellend, and actually have a plan that makes some sense, even for a megalomaniac (I actually thought he might secretly be a Custodian with a heretofore unknown or rare power).

Plot contrivances abound in this book; I don't remember amplifiers or finders being mentioned in any of the previous books, and it feels cheap (someone please correct me, if I'm wrong,); this would be like, if the characters in a story need a device that can create unicorns, and they happen to find a person who built such a device, at the exact moment where, if they found it any later, it would be too late.

The retcon that NPZ's don't work underwater is beyond the pale.

Why doesn't The Superintendent kill Philip, the finder, and Bentley's son with bullets? Why does he concoct an elaborate (and prone to failure) plan to slowly drown them? Three bullets would ensure a much more economic and final guarantee that his plan would succeed.

Oh, and Philip can move the moon? The moon! Really! They mind as well should have relied on him to keep the solar system in motion after the moon was blown up, for how little attention Jeremy pays to power-scaling. They can also just pluck Pluto from its place to replace the moon? There is no build up to how overpowered the characters are (e.g., Can Emmaline move the solar system itself? What is the barrier between a planet/planetoid and its surrounding moons, debris, etc that stops her powers from transporting them?); each character's powers work exactly as the story requires. Logic? What's that? Can I smoke it?

I really liked the first book; it was unique, and it seemed as if Jeremy was taking pains to think through the logical implications of each person's powers, and how they could be combined with others' powers to allow for an effective team strategy, as well as conflict. But now, Philip might as well be a god, as well as Emmaline, and The Superintendent mind as well have a huge mustache that he's constantly twirling.

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