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Irene Bali

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Hung on stereo types, privilege, and cliches.

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-25-22

The narration is good, moments of the writing are clever but much of the description builds on someone who is obviously privileged trying to be gritty, but comes across more like college flash fiction from someone trying to be more interesting than they are in a master's program. Much of the writing comes across more as clever quips than true deep exploration of the human condition and addiction, leaning frequently on racial stereotypes as a weak cop out, as opposed to actual character development and description. This writer hasn't found the actual story in the story, just another LA Burnout with better than mediocre talent but short of actual art. Best as chewy pulp.

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A tru story but flat in writing.

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-06-19

It was interesting because it was a true story. I couldn't get over the authors use of idear instead of idea.

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like reading a bad news story.

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-14-16

the narration is good. half the time I no idea what tangent the story is on. there is no depth to characters or even any actual information.

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Glad it was only 2 hours!

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-14-16

First off the earnest longing tone of the narration is distracting and painful. The character is hallow and underdeveloped. The story while important lacks any visceral description or emotional depth. It is like listening to a made for tv movie read by a soap opera star. I was tolerant because I thought it was a true account, then realized it was a badly written, cliche filled rag of fiction.

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Verbal masturbation.

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-24-15

I really wanted to like this book. I tried. But it seems the writer becomes lost in her own metaphors and imagery that the story itself looses any tension or momentum. The tense shifts loose me, which would bother me if I cared after the 3rd chapter. She is great at imagery and witty comparisons. But after a while the story is lost and it just starts feeling like an indulgent need to fill pages. The writer has real skill sure, but her skill alone couldn't carry my attention for 12 hours! I enjoyed The Liars Club but it got in and got out, it was a clean piece of writing. Then "Lit" took some cliche, "I found God in AA," twist that was so predictable I didn't expect it at all, which made me hate it even more. If you really, really love this author or want to fill a page with clever metaphors, well, you might love it.

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